I do not think this is right.

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I Do not think that I am doing this website the right way. I am making posts and it just does not seem like it is right to me. But some how it got ranked in google this afternoon. I would like for you to let me know your opinion. Thanks. http://behealthybeyoung.com Thanks.

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You are doing it right. It looks really good. Just keep fine tuning everything. Don't let self-doubt stop you.

You just started, can you imagine in 6 months how good it will look?

I have a couple suggestions:
1. Use "Lose" weight instead of "Loose" weight
2. Under your subheadings, instead of one big paragraph, see if you can break it up into smaller paragraphs. I mean... don't change your content at all just push it down into 3 or 4 paragraphs instead of 1 big block of text.

I hope this makes sense and helps but I think your information is really important. I'm in a health niche too.

Thank you very much Lisa. I will give that a try.

I think your site is coming along great! It is clean and simple with nothing distracting from your content. I might suggest adding some color either in the navigation bar or the title text and perhaps adding a featured image to your posts maybe, just to add visual effect, but that is personal preference.

When you start adding affiliate links, you want to also be sure to add an affiliate disclosure and since your site is health related, you may wish to add a medical disclaimer. You can find training here on the affiliate disclosure: Good luck and keep up the great work!
Shannon

a very healthy insights Ms Jaz333!

Thank you.

Thank you very much Shannon, and I appreciate the additional information as well.

Thanks, I benefited from this disclosure information tooo.

Excellent, happy to help :)

Looks good to me Keith and I am in agreement with Mel a few more pictures won't come amiss as it breaks the monotony of the text.

There is also something you should be aware of just so you don't foul of it posting your website link on here is considered self-promotion and considered spam which can earn you write ban.

There are areas within WA where you can seek comments and affix a link to your blog such as website feedback just so you are aware.

R.

Thank you very much and I appreciate the tip.

You are most welcome Keith! I made the same mistake and a very kind soul alerted me to it appeared churlish to me not to do the same!! ;

R

Keep it up!

Thank you very much.

It's looking good to me. I would suggest adding more images. Keep up the good work!

Mel

Thank You very much Mel.

You are most welcome Keith!

Mel

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