I've written a controversial Screen-play and the feedback is what you'd expect lol

bykevinv91

245 followers

4 years ago

Firstly the screenplay I wrote is for a 30 min animated series. It involves political figures. I roast everyone and anyone in this series for a good laugh. I'm an independent thinker and agree and disagree with issues on both sides of the political spectrum. So please don't label me. Lol.

That being said, my first review was terrible, lol. It seemed the man wrote it just to spite me for even thinking up such a story. He seemed made. I didn't make fun of Trump enough when he was the main laughing point of the entire first episode.

He ended his review by saying this.

"TV series potential:

There is already an animated TV show about Donald Trump on the air. Even if this script was properly formatted, it would have a hard time on the current market given the existence of "Our Cartoon President"

The only relevant feedback I received was my screenplay was not organized properly in the usual screenplay fashion. He also went on to say it would never be published. (I'm fired-up with excitement as I write this) It just drives me even harder to prove him wrong as a bonus. He gave my script a 1 out of 10! I'm laughing because I can only go up from there!

My first review was quite the opposite.

The first reviewer said, in summary, he saw potential In the concept and liked some of the comedy in the scenes. He said it was possible it could make a good web series, if nothing else, with the right animator (which I would love to do!)

He did point out the flaws in my Screenplay writing but in a professional and informative way. His review I could use to grow from, the other I could not.

The site the https://blcklst.com/ gave me an option to purchase another professional review for only $30 when they cost $150 each. They gave me this $30 option because the critics' reviews of my work were so conflicting 😆😲😒.

When you hit a controversial issue, and there is conflicting feedback like this. I believe there's an opportunity for it to be a hit. If I can fix my screenwriting flaws and express my vision in the best way in front of the right people, it's possible.

I did my own video on this, but it's on my Facebook. Anyone can check me out and friend request if they'd like.

I'm not dropping links or self-promoting, just sharing with like-minded individuals like you all. Being hungry for success and financially free for life is what we are all after. Those are the kind of people I like to surround myself with, if even only virtually.

What do you think of my conflicting feedback?

What's your take on covering controversial people and topics with comedy?

Thus far, my entire screenplay is kind of like South Park met Rick and Morty and had a baby. And then that baby grew up and had another baby with Family Guy.😆

I'm too much, I know, HAHA! ✌