Hey Kaci,

Why are you using blogger.com when you can build a blog here at WA? There are far more advantages to using wordpress than blogger. So I would recommend building your blog here and follow the training in terms of doing that so you get the full benefits of the WA membership and technology.

Other than that your content is good. But I would recommend changing the title so it's more clear this is a review.

So something like Legal Shield Review: It is a legit business or not?

And I would also recommend providing a pros and cons section so people know the good and bad. Folks will trust you more. Anytime I see a review that doesn't layout some of the bad, I trust it less because I know it just means the person is a rep and won't be objective. But if I read a review that gives me the pros and cons, if the cons aren't anything too crazy, I'm more inclined to join because I already know some of the bad going in.

So just keep your audience in mind. Too often when we're reps of companies we're just focused on ourselves and trying to make a sale. And it can work against you if you can't address the valid concerns or fears people have or the things they'll read online.

I hope this helps.

Hey!

It is really good y looks profesional! Congratulations!

Wow, your page looks very nice and professional and you explained your experience with Legal Shield very well. Great work! :)