Good morning Joseph,

I looked at your video and had hoped to see a tad more tease, to me something was missing in form of a fleeting image.

Have a good day, regards, Taetske

I think it's a neat idea. Keep's people thinking about what you are brewing up. Also a significant improvement from the first production. Keep up the good work
Jerome

Interesting presentation!

I like it :-)

Sure... I think that's a great idea. People write that kind of thing before they have content published.

Yep, I got the same message as kasage00. Did you remove it from YouTube after all?

it said it was removed by the user

Hi Joseph,
First of, thank you for your service to our country. I applaud you for taking this big step in producing you first video production. It shows that you are determined to be successful with your business. I have to agree with what other members are saying pertaining to the quality of the video but as you mentioned, it is your first one. The sound quality was not the very best. It was very difficult to understand the message you were trying to relay. The image in the beginning was really shaded and hard to see you. I sure that if you implemented some of the suggestions that members have offered here you next production will be an awesome one. Again, very good effort on your first production. I look forward to your next one.
Jerome

You are a step ahead of me. I too plan to begin making videos.

I thought that there was a lot of movement in the picture so maybe try a tripod of even a pillow for a steady camera shot. The big challenge was the audio. I simply could not hear what you were saying on a consistent basis. I have found that there are quite a few inexpensive microphones for smartphones out there. A place I go to is http://www.storyguide.net/. This guy makes a lot of sense to me as I prepare to dive into the video world as well.

I wish you well and great success with your video venture.

Good Morning Joseph
My parents are veterans and they fought in two Gulf Wars and I thank you for your service. Your websites are great and coupled with video is it easy to your focused and work hard. Your initiative to make a video is great but the video itself is awful. I chuckle when I say that, but consider this. I've taken the time to watch your video and provide feedback and like Chris Scott said you can do better. Good Luck with the greenhouse and I can't wait to see your next video.

There will be many many more and you are going to be awesome. Thank you for your service and soldier on with this thing as you are a soldier!! Hookah!!

PS. The video sucks, scrap it and start over! You can do better take it down is my advice because you never get a second chance to make a first impression. You DO NOT want that thing to be your first impression.

Now, I did not tell you that to be an ass but because you asked and I care.

Now go make some money.

I am a Veteran, so I wish to thank you for your service, of course.
The video:

The music is overpowering so that most of the words are lost in it.

The few that I heard were disjointed to the point I did not know what the point of the video was. No distinct enunciation is very aggravating because I wanted to understand what you were about.

The framing mechanism was distracting and there was not connection between you and me (eye contact was almost totally lacking)

Mickeyb

Nice video. I could barely hear you though because of the music. Music was cool though!

Good production!