I need some feedback please

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Here is the link to my new digital product.

https://instantpublisherguide.jaredsdigitalagency.com/0f124b11

I have training here at WA showing how a person can do this for themselves.

I am looking for feedback, be critical please. I am almost finished but I know it is lacking.

There are no purchase links. The page is simply a draft. This is not spam. I am looking for feedback.

Thanks

Jared

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From a proofreader's point of view -

Spelling error (consistently),

Two versions of your product name (Instant Publisher Guide and Instant Publishing Guide),

Oddly phrased sentence (This course contains include sensitive one-time product samples),

Inconsistency in my/I and we/our (are you a one-man band or a company?),

And the contact form at the end doesn't have a box to enter your first name.

Appreciate it. I'm both. A company that's really just me. I will have to review and fix. Should I keep contact form?

Thanks again.

Well, either add a box for first name, or change the wording of the other box to just say name, as opposed to last name.

I would add a disclaimer too, to say you won't spam or sell their email address.

It came up page not found a 404 error when I tried to review it.

Wonder why? It did work when posted and reviewed. But thanks for the effort.

It's functional now but the large images are making it take a very long time to load. You need to think of maybe reducing large graphics and fonts, to make it both load faster and be mobile friendly. I see it is on Systeme instead of WP so you need to use a image compression app to reduce file sized before uploading as well.

Did as suggested. I knew better. Lesson learned. Thank you.

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