I need some feedback please
Here is the link to my new digital product.
https://instantpublisherguide.jaredsdigitalagency.com/0f124b11
I have training here at WA showing how a person can do this for themselves.
I am looking for feedback, be critical please. I am almost finished but I know it is lacking.
There are no purchase links. The page is simply a draft. This is not spam. I am looking for feedback.
Thanks
Jared
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It's functional now but the large images are making it take a very long time to load. You need to think of maybe reducing large graphics and fonts, to make it both load faster and be mobile friendly. I see it is on Systeme instead of WP so you need to use a image compression app to reduce file sized before uploading as well.
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From a proofreader's point of view -
Spelling error (consistently),
Two versions of your product name (Instant Publisher Guide and Instant Publishing Guide),
Oddly phrased sentence (This course contains include sensitive one-time product samples),
Inconsistency in my/I and we/our (are you a one-man band or a company?),
And the contact form at the end doesn't have a box to enter your first name.
Appreciate it. I'm both. A company that's really just me. I will have to review and fix. Should I keep contact form?
Thanks again.
Well, either add a box for first name, or change the wording of the other box to just say name, as opposed to last name.
I would add a disclaimer too, to say you won't spam or sell their email address.