Creating "About Me" page
Hi guys, I'm getting my website ready and I'm creating my "About Me" page. I am not good at writing about me. My niche is first time moms. Below is what I have come up so far for "About Me" page. Let me know what you think. Thank you!
Hey there newbie moms like me! I’m Gen and welcome to my website. I’m a homemaker and a stay home mom – at least for now. I gave birth to a beautiful baby girl in April 2016. She’s our first baby and we are so blessed to have her. Being a first time mother can be exciting, challenging and overwhelming. You are not alone! I completely understand how you feel.
I created this site to share my experiences and give pieces of advice to first time mothers. I am not an expert and my opinions are only based on real life experiences.
In this website, I am encouraging you to share your insights and experiences to help first time moms. We have unique experiences and I can’t wait to hear from you. Being a mom can be tiring but it is definitely fun and fulfilling.
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Hi Gen,
There is one point I would have wrote differently. I wouldn't mention that I am not an expert but I will focus instead on who am I, what can I do for them and why it will be interesting for them to stick around. And all because you will adress problems and will come up with solutions. It is only a sugestion. Even if you are going to keep it as it is now it is already great because it represents you. I wish you all the best.
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Hi Gen, I like it, to me you come across a warm caring person who truly wants to share her experiences to help others.