Thanks to WA for teaching mwe how to create my own website ,please view my site and give me comment
Please give me comments on my site but i still have a lot to do go to www.onlinerichesunleashed.com
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Hi Florida, you are on your way with your website. Obviously you are just getting starting, so you have a bit of tweaking to do, but so far so good. As Deb mentioned, it would be better to use anchor texts for your links, they look more reader friendly. Here is a tutorial by Leo that shows you how to do that:
https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/creating-links
I also noticed that you have typed commas instead of periods at the end of your sentences. I see you have done the same in your introduction at WA, and it is easy to fix. Well done! ~Jude
Congrats to you for getting your first site up.
I agree with Bald Eagle about the flashing pictures. You want to have the message of your site above the fold (meaning at the eye level of the reader when they first get to your site.)
If you really love that theme, then you could take out the random people pictures and have a few main messages flash across the top, so the reader has an idea what your site is about instantly.
I would also look at the training on masking your affiliate links. that will help you hide those long affiliate links.
All in all you have done a great job just getting your site up and some content on it. Most people do not even make it that far. You should be very proud of yourself.
Yeah, Deb and the Eagle nailed it and I might add that until you are actually selling something, I would deactivate the shop, cart and checkout pages/tabs in the menu. At this point they do add a bit of nuisance. Love the site though, and I do think that you're onto something with it. There's definitely some good content, good writing and info here.
Thanks Deb I was actually confused at first when I started everything I will try my best but I think I need some help
If you ever need any help, just message me and I will see if I can help you out in anyway I can. Or just brainstorm with you.
At first appearance I have no idea what the purpose of the site is and that flashing banner/header is a major distraction - far too busy for me.
Also the images within the banner are squashed.
But you have made a good start and are on your way - well done
@Bald thanks for your straight forward comments I bet you are a teacher somewhere ,I definitely don't need the ecommerce pugin for now I was actual learning it and I wil remove it
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I really like the theme you've chosen. Just a couple of suggestions ... I'm no expert so feel free to take them with a grain of salt if you so wish. The 'flashing' pictures (unless you have changed them due to the feedback you got below) are fine (to me). I thing the quality of the photo on the slider with 6 people isn't great and is slightly off-putting. Maybe if you added some more pitcures to the slider, and change the slider settings to change the pictures less often and more slowly - it would be good too. Good luck with it.
Thanks Oilean my problem now is designing the entire website iam getting there with basics but designing is still a challenge still learning how to do that how do I add pictures to the slider