Hey Ella I see that Kyle has provided some good tips. I would say certainly change the font colour and the size to make it more readable.

Nice work Ella. One suggestion I would have is breaking down the particular items that you are reviewing, and not centering them within your review.

Frame Width:
Frame Height:
etc.

And then making them feel like they are part of the actually commentary on that particular sunglass section.

Also, the light grey text is harder to read than black and this will hurt your overall readability. Something to consider as well, if this is a overall theme default, you may want to look into getting that changed.

Well done, I hope you get some response on publishing your article. Best wishes.

Good job.
Keep on moving.

Hey
That's terrific.
Wishing you continued success.