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Hello everyone, I have my first site up and would appreciate any feedback. It is still a work in progress. It is geared to Baby Boomers as I am one. http://affiliate.central.siterubix.com. I just want to know if I am on track building up my content. THANKS !

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I clicked on the link you provided and something went wrong. it does not take me to your website.

Hi Donna

Welcome to WA! I'm also a baby boomer ;)

Great start. I can see that you're working through the course which is absolutely the best way forward.

As far as your content goes I would recommend you expand on what you've written. Put in more value into them.

I noticed that you have link url's within some of the posts which aren't clickable & don't enhance your post. Down the line in your training you will learn different ways of displaying them.

But I'll give you a couple of tips ...
For say the video link in your "Create a website in under 30 seconds" post where you say "Watch this video"
maybe say "Watch this video here" & link the word 'here' to the video.

The way to have a word or several words linked to something else is to
- be in the wp post editor for that post (same place where you originally wrote the post)
- highlight the words you want to link in your posts
- then on the 1st row of the toolbar you'll see an icon that looks like a chain link click it (if you hover over it it says insert/edit link)
- a window will pop up
- now click on the gear icon & you'll have more options
- in the first box called "url" paste the link you have in your post
- the box below that called "Link Text" will show the word or words you highlighted at the beginning of this process
- then click the box below next to the words "Open link in a new tab" if you want your visitors to still be on your site & be able to find you after they've watched the video on the other tab
- ignore the rest & just click add link
- Save your post & view the preview or published post on your site

You will notice that the words you highlighted are now linked.

You can also add images & have them link in much the same way.

I hope that helps & makes sense :)
Best wishes
Brigitte

Thank you so much Brigitte, I will makes some tweaks, thanks !

My pleasure Donna. :)

Just so you are aware the link to your site is
http://affiliatecentral.siterubix.com/
without the dot between affiliate & central.

Best wishes
Brigitte

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