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Landing page URL - https://eguidefinder.com/
Traffic - Will drive PPC traffic (via Google, Bing, Yahoo).
Broad Match Modified Keywords for:
how to make money
Looks great Dimco, just one thing I would maybe change is the color of the button as the blue doesn't really stand out enough maybe a yellow would look better.
I would split text whether it works better with an opt-in box on your page and with the popup.
Also maybe an image of the 9 modules in the sales page, details of exactly what they get, the more info you can get across the more people will want to sign up.
Just my thoughts great job though.
Martin
Thank you. Yeah, I wasn't really sure about the button color. Will change it something brighter for sure.
Will play around with the opt in.
i like the image idea! Not that you said it, it's kind of obvious to me.
Thank you for your input.
It looks good Dmitriy, though a would make a coupe of small changes:
The top tab says Sales Page, might want to change that.
Also, it would be great to see the CTA button within the first folld. Maybe make the image a little smaller so it all fits, then people can scroll down if they want more information.
Thank you. Will change the title.
It's a video, not an image. I will make sure it actually stands out as a video. So HUGE thank you for this one.
I'll play around with the CTA above the fold.
Thank you so much!
Hi Dimco, I looked at your page. great designing job. the words "free" and "over deliver" stand out, the video is clear. i can see that a certain demographic will engage with you right away. others might see it too much as a "sell only" page, like where "content before sell" is more attractive to them. but overall, great job!
Thank you for the feedback.
In your opinion, which demographic do you think would work best with sell the only approach?
Content before selling - I have a funnel that does this, maybe I should just split test this one.
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Can you guys please review my landing page?
Landing page URL - https://eguidefinder.com/
Traffic - Will drive PPC traffic (via Google, Bing, Yahoo).
Broad Match Modified Keywords for:
how to make money
for me the sales vid goes into too much depth of what you are going to learn - what i want when i first watch is how is it going to benefit me not what am i going to do
i want to know that i don't need any experience
it's step by step with templates for each step.
choose a niche you are interested in - we show you the most profitable ones...
it takes very little time to setup
no technical experience needed
no .....
so it is the benefits rather than the features.
and short snappy bites with a pause ot allow it to sink in before you hit them with the next one.
just my opinion
i wish you well with it...Dmitriy - if you are not too busy.....( really - i would never say that- it put me off...)
phil
Thank you this is good stuff. Yeah copywriting was always my weakest link. I will redo the video with your suggestions.
What do you mean by this "( really - i would never say that- it put me off...)"?
Thank you
remember what made you take this up - remember the feeling when you were told that you didn't need any tech skills, it doesn't take too long, once setup makes a passive income - presumably you get others to answer the phone.
when you said about 'when you call 'ask to speak to Dmitriy and i will be too busy to talk to you -you will be told i am...'
what i would put is ' i will be happy to talk to you, if i am around and not busy making another site'
Looks great Dimco, just one thing I would maybe change is the color of the button as the blue doesn't really stand out enough maybe a yellow would look better.
I would split text whether it works better with an opt-in box on your page and with the popup.
Also maybe an image of the 9 modules in the sales page, details of exactly what they get, the more info you can get across the more people will want to sign up.
Just my thoughts great job though.
Martin
Thank you. Yeah, I wasn't really sure about the button color. Will change it something brighter for sure.
Will play around with the opt in.
i like the image idea! Not that you said it, it's kind of obvious to me.
Thank you for your input.
It looks good Dmitriy, though a would make a coupe of small changes:
The top tab says Sales Page, might want to change that.
Also, it would be great to see the CTA button within the first folld. Maybe make the image a little smaller so it all fits, then people can scroll down if they want more information.
Thank you. Will change the title.
It's a video, not an image. I will make sure it actually stands out as a video. So HUGE thank you for this one.
I'll play around with the CTA above the fold.
Thank you so much!
Hi Dimco, I looked at your page. great designing job. the words "free" and "over deliver" stand out, the video is clear. i can see that a certain demographic will engage with you right away. others might see it too much as a "sell only" page, like where "content before sell" is more attractive to them. but overall, great job!
Thank you for the feedback.
In your opinion, which demographic do you think would work best with sell the only approach?
Content before selling - I have a funnel that does this, maybe I should just split test this one.
See more comments
for me the sales vid goes into too much depth of what you are going to learn - what i want when i first watch is how is it going to benefit me not what am i going to do
i want to know that i don't need any experience
it's step by step with templates for each step.
choose a niche you are interested in - we show you the most profitable ones...
it takes very little time to setup
no technical experience needed
no .....
so it is the benefits rather than the features.
and short snappy bites with a pause ot allow it to sink in before you hit them with the next one.
just my opinion
i wish you well with it...Dmitriy - if you are not too busy.....( really - i would never say that- it put me off...)
phil
Thank you this is good stuff. Yeah copywriting was always my weakest link. I will redo the video with your suggestions.
What do you mean by this "( really - i would never say that- it put me off...)"?
Thank you
remember what made you take this up - remember the feeling when you were told that you didn't need any tech skills, it doesn't take too long, once setup makes a passive income - presumably you get others to answer the phone.
when you said about 'when you call 'ask to speak to Dmitriy and i will be too busy to talk to you -you will be told i am...'
what i would put is ' i will be happy to talk to you, if i am around and not busy making another site'
mmm... Thank you so much!!!