Thanks everyone, I will put every advice to use. Im not a very talented writer so your help is really a big boost for me.

Hi

Ok the content is interesting which is good, but to add polish to your page, this what I would do, allowing your reader to easily engage with every aspect of your About page content.

1) Make sure to keep each paragraph 4 lines - I know you have 6 or 2 lines in some paragraphs but this will tidy it up and makes reading easier (don't want to give the reader the impression of reading a book.

2) Heading Cues - I find most About pages boring not by the content but by the structured information provided.
When changing a subject within each paragraph just head it with a cue of what the Paragraph/s is about - gives a reader insight of what that paragraph is about.
So it would go something like this:

So who is Omar?
- paragraph/s

Why did I build this Website?
- Paragraph/s

Share your Experience with us.
- Paragraph/s

If you have any keywords - you can also include this within your cue heading and then within your content

Hope this helps - other than that well done on your progress - Colin

You need to break up the text in to smaller parts say 3 to 4 lines it will be easier to read. Add images especially your own it helps to build trust. Overall not a bad start, not keen on the header image by the way

Wow, looks great! I would add a small photo of you on it for a personal touch. They do like to see who they are dealing with. :) If you had a soccer pic of you, that would be awesome (I think).