Critique My Site

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Okay, my time is almost up for the 10 day trial with WA and so far I have enjoyed it, but due to long hours on the job my free time for WA has been limited and there is so much more to learn. I have a website with a few ads on it and I think a pretty nice layout, however, I don't know if it is my articles, my approach to the niche or the niche itself that is keeping me from generating any sales.

So today, I'm asking all that can, please look at my site, leave some comments or critique it and leave the critique information through the contact page. This way, I get some unbiased opinions (not my Mothers, which she always says "I love it."), and my site gets tested. I would greatly appreciate the participation and will return the favor.

Here is the url to my first affiliate website (blog): www.cryingearth.com

"The best things in life don't come easy."

Have a great day!
Kevin

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I've only been here a week, I am still in the beginning stages of my site, but I would love some feedback on my first few pages.
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That is an awesome site. And all this could be done through WA. The web design and everything. Hopefully I don't sound so naive. It's a great site.

LMMoran1128, Thanks for visiting the site and the compliments.

Actually I had the site already when I signed on with WA! I started with a free wordpress template and just kept tweaking the site. I think sometimes I spend too much time on the design and not enough time on the content, but I'm now working on that.

Wow I am new here but if you wonted to move people to think it sure got me !
I'm not an expert on site building but I like your content. I think I will go an delete my site and start over :-)

Thanks Ron, but don't delete your site and start over. Sometimes the simplest of sites make good money. I would focus on content and just work on tweaking your site a little at a time.

Jay said it best, and I am stealing some of his advice! I love the green on your site.I really can not add more than what Jay said

Shawn, thank you for checking it out. I thought the green color was appropriate for the site.

Great recommendations made by magistudios.

You might also want to add a privacy policy and a sitemap...I would put these in the footer.

For appearances only, you might also add a unique favicon.

Thanks jhoecannon! I have been planning on adding a privacy policy and sitemap, but just haven't got there yet. I did add a disclosure statement and a comment code of ethics document. Now the unique favicon is something I just hadn't thought about, but should have. Thanks for the advice!

Job well done!

I think you should spend some time on the meta title & descriptions.
For example:
* Google your domain cryingearth.com and see what it looks like in the search engines.
* I notice your home page title says 'crying earth' - try to spice that up a bit with a tag line
* Like this: Human Impact on the Planet's Environment | CryingEarth.com
* Next is the Meta Description:
* Like this: Learn More About the Human Impact on the Planet Earth Environment, What's Being Done and What You Can Do to Help

* These meta titles & descriptions give you the change to make a great first impression on someone who is searching for something related to your niche.

Thank you majistudios! Thanks for the great advice and I will be making the changes soon!

The site looks great!!! mine is just a template but it gives me something to aspire to while creating content. I'm sure you will be a success!

“Success is stumbling from failure to failure with no loss of enthusiasm.”
― Winston Churchill

Yes, that it is what it is :)

Thanks onlinewealth! It would be nice to be successful at something you love to do, wouldn't it? That is my goal!

It looks really good. You already have 12 FB likes! You definitely will reach
large audience with this site. Create FB fan page related this topic and promote this site there.

Thanks paci! I like your advice and will take it seriously and create a FB fan page. Thanks again for the advice.

hi, just had a quick look at your site and it looks pretty impressive, especially since you've only been here for 10 days or so. Navigation is easy and the blog page looks well laid out. When I went to the products page I only saw 2 'green' products - Aquaponics 4 u and the food for wealth one. I would suggest maybe finding a few more products to offer on this page, clickbank has a few green or organic products to choose out of. Other than this I thought it quite impressive

Thanks chris for visiting my site and the compliments! I recently applied to amazon and was accepted into there program so I am now going to add a lot more products. Thanks again for the visit and the advice!

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