Two newest posts! Feedback Please!
Hey friends I have published two new posts that kinda go together.
Please check them out and give me any feedback!
http://guidemyretirement.com/2014/03/what-is-leverage-in-real-estate-in-laymans-terms/
http://guidemyretirement.com/2014/03/real-estate-roi-calculations/
Thanks in advance!
-Joe
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Your site is really looking good. Would recommend a mouse over on your Photos and take the visitor some place with more information. People like to explore. I send them to my getting started page
Hey Bill! I appreciate you checking out those two pages and leaving comments! I don't know how to do a mouse over on the pics. I really want to do that on some buttons I have placed on other pages but haven't quite figured it out yet.
Hi SeasonGift!
Thank you! I am always worrying about how to organize my content so I'm glad you made mention that it is doing okay.
Hi Joe, Very impressive and well organized website with wealth of information. I agree with Andy to have an engaging heading to show visitors what do they get when they arrive at your website. As I mentioned this tricky "3 seconds" window, you know what I mean, I need to get back to redo my website too:)
Hi Fred!
Thanks for leaving a comment on the site! Every little bit helps! Yes, that small window to hook the reader is something I need to focus on. I'll be taking yours and Andy's suggestions seriously.
you know your market best- the posts are very clear and well written and the site looks very neat and clean...
Not sure if your readers will already know about what you are writing but I would like a heads up on the BENEFITS or "why bother" aspects.in other words not "what is" but more along the lines of "leverage your way to $1,000,000 portfolio in less than 24 months using real estate" if you see what I mean...
you car clearly an authority....great job, Andy
Hey thanks Andy!
I appreciate your take and I totally understand.
I've been struggling with headlines like that because in the real estate investing world much like the online marketing world there are LOTS of scams out there just looking for a credit card number based on hype.
So I lean more to the passive/conservative side I guess. I will most assuredly try to "spice" it up a bit to drum up more interest!
Thanks again!
Joe, I liked this exchange, and bear with me for a 'tick...it is always a risk giving open forum comments on sites balancing the good and the stuff that does not quite sit (only from the reader's perspective- it is all a matter of opinion) and I had a hunch that you would have considered this angle, as your site is well thought through.
So- thank you for reacting and conversing as you have.
I have seen other examples of people either giving or taking offence when it was not necessary and the whole vibe seemed to generate a lot of column inches- bad news V good news, and all that..
I prefer constructive, and thanks for yours. Andy
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Your site looks great!.
Hi Jan!
Thanks for taking a look!