My First Facebook Blog? Post
Alright guys, So I have been to busy playing with google +, twitter, youtube, etc. That I have kind of forget to put some time in facebook. I want your guys opinion if this is the kind of writing or target I am aiming for. I do want criticism, because I want to learn to make facebook posts that will gain peoples interest. That's everyones goal, Right?
I know this post on facebook is long, Normally I don't think I will write this much, but i want your guys opinions and thoughts if you feel like this is a decent post or not.
I don't know if this type of thing is allowed or not? I didn't think it would be a problem, and if it is i will definitely take it down.
Let me know what you think
https://www.facebook.com/DOS-Marketing-17771964758...
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All I can think of is DOS as it refers to computers. Back when that was the only thing you used to start things on you computer. It looks like the command prompt on Windows 10, just back when I was a kid that's all that showed up lol. The DOS acronym is a bit distracting from what you're trying to share, if you could just change DOS to something else, your content would get the attention it deserves. Other than that I think you got a great page, best of luck to you!
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I like it ....how did you get that big window to pop up? please maybe do a blog or tutorial about it will you please :-)) xoxox how are you feeling today xoxo
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WOW.........really different to last week honey....really like it........you will have to tell me in PM how you did some of those popups and share buttons etc.....reallly cool :-))
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