How to write using the Hemingway App
Remember our original text?
Now look at it after I removed the adverb "just" and made two sentences instead of one long run-on sentence.
See how easy that was?
When I read the sentence originally, I thought it was fine. I saw nothing wrong with it. Now when I compare the two, I clearly see that the second paragraph is much better than the first. It is much clearer.
Now I am going to clean up the entire short story and let's see what that looks like.
Much better isn't it? I left three adverbs in the text because I liked them, but the story would have been okay without them, too. Now I have 0 of 22 sentences that are hard to read and 0 of 22 that are very hard to read.