How's it going!? My name is Dev. I joined WA back in 2012 while studying Graphic Design. During that time I launched my first website that began to see decent profits by the end of college.
After school I got a job in PPC for about 6 months, then got a job as an SEO Analyst for about 4 years. I had to get 2 jobs to make ends meet and my website suffered considerably. 6 years past of stagnant nothingness.
And now I'm back and more ready to build this business than I've ever been. I hope to share with you all the knowledge I've gained over the years and to also gain plenty of that knowledge here myself! Let's work together to make all of our dreams come true!
After school I got a job in PPC for about 6 months, then got a job as an SEO Analyst for about 4 years. I had to get 2 jobs to make ends meet and my website suffered considerably. 6 years past of stagnant nothingness.
And now I'm back and more ready to build this business than I've ever been. I hope to share with you all the knowledge I've gained over the years and to also gain plenty of that knowledge here myself! Let's work together to make all of our dreams come true!
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jaratrim09
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Hey, thank you for following, looks like you have a good niche to start, wish you the best.
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Hi Deven
Regarding your article - These are things you need to think about in the future.
1) The headline. It needs to be compelling and interesting. Yours is:
"The Best Type Of Guitar Wood For Beautiful Tone" - This is grammatically horrible. Don't use headlines like this. I don't know exactly what your keyword is - but here's 3 examples
.
a) 3 Reasons why the best type of guitar wood will guarantee a beautiful tone'
b) 'What you need to know about the best type of guitar wood.
c) Choose the best type of guitar wood will get you the best tone
None of the above are brilliant but they're more enticing than yours. Your headline is important. and if it doesn't entice them people won't carry on reading. I would have stopped at your headline. Obviously some have read it, but it could be one of the reasons why you didn't get more.
2) Proofreading - This takes time - but I suggest you always read your work out loud. The second sentence actually doesn't make sense. I am not just talking about poor grammar - that's not a big deal. It actually doesn't make sense (and I'm a guitar player)
3) Subheadings are really important because people skim read.
Your first one is " How and Why Company Budgeting Is Hurting Us" - I thought you were going to be talking about financial issues. It's completely inappropriate for the topic. Only 16% of people will read a whole article. You have to use sensible headlines.
Your second one was "Then what happened?" This means nothing - it's a waste of a subheading.
4) Your heading has to match the content. I've read your article 3 or 4 times - which of course I would never do as a reader - but at the end of it - it is still not clear to me which woods provide the best tone. Your heading sounds as if I would find out. If you don't do this correctly people won't bother with your articles in the future.
5) Links. With that length article you could have had 2 links. Always use the maximum you are allowed to increase your chances of people clicking through.
Hope this helps
Regarding your article - These are things you need to think about in the future.
1) The headline. It needs to be compelling and interesting. Yours is:
"The Best Type Of Guitar Wood For Beautiful Tone" - This is grammatically horrible. Don't use headlines like this. I don't know exactly what your keyword is - but here's 3 examples
.
a) 3 Reasons why the best type of guitar wood will guarantee a beautiful tone'
b) 'What you need to know about the best type of guitar wood.
c) Choose the best type of guitar wood will get you the best tone
None of the above are brilliant but they're more enticing than yours. Your headline is important. and if it doesn't entice them people won't carry on reading. I would have stopped at your headline. Obviously some have read it, but it could be one of the reasons why you didn't get more.
2) Proofreading - This takes time - but I suggest you always read your work out loud. The second sentence actually doesn't make sense. I am not just talking about poor grammar - that's not a big deal. It actually doesn't make sense (and I'm a guitar player)
3) Subheadings are really important because people skim read.
Your first one is " How and Why Company Budgeting Is Hurting Us" - I thought you were going to be talking about financial issues. It's completely inappropriate for the topic. Only 16% of people will read a whole article. You have to use sensible headlines.
Your second one was "Then what happened?" This means nothing - it's a waste of a subheading.
4) Your heading has to match the content. I've read your article 3 or 4 times - which of course I would never do as a reader - but at the end of it - it is still not clear to me which woods provide the best tone. Your heading sounds as if I would find out. If you don't do this correctly people won't bother with your articles in the future.
5) Links. With that length article you could have had 2 links. Always use the maximum you are allowed to increase your chances of people clicking through.
Hope this helps
ThatGuyDev
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Awesome! Thank you so much. I've had a much higher work load the past few days but I really appreciate your suggestions and will get to work on them as soon as I have time this week. I definitely agree with most of what you said. Proof reading is a big enemy of mine... That needs to change. Thanks again!
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