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I started learning online marketing back in 2011 while studying Graphic Design in college. While in school I used most of my free time to learn the ins and outs of online marketing and eventually built a successful website.
In my free time I love to play guitar, snowboard and taking care of my snakes. Currently, I work as an SEO Analyst for an agency full time and spend my nights working on my own site. I'm always eager to make new connections and help people out so if you've read this far, why not drop me a comment and connect? :)
Thanks for stopping by and I hope we can collaborate sometime!
I started learning online marketing back in 2011 while studying Graphic Design in college. While in school I used most of my free time to learn the ins and outs of online marketing and eventually built a successful website.
In my free time I love to play guitar, snowboard and taking care of my snakes. Currently, I work as an SEO Analyst for an agency full time and spend my nights working on my own site. I'm always eager to make new connections and help people out so if you've read this far, why not drop me a comment and connect? :)
Thanks for stopping by and I hope we can collaborate sometime!
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Hi Deven
Regarding your article - These are things you need to think about in the future.
1) The headline. It needs to be compelling and interesting. Yours is:
"The Best Type Of Guitar Wood For Beautiful Tone" - This is grammatically horrible. Don't use headlines like this. I don't know exactly what your keyword is - but here's 3 examples
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a) 3 Reasons why the best type of guitar wood will guarantee a beautiful tone'
b) 'What you need to know about the best type of guitar wood.
c) Choose the best type of guitar wood will get you the best tone
None of the above are brilliant but they're more enticing than yours. Your headline is important. and if it doesn't entice them people won't carry on reading. I would have stopped at your headline. Obviously some have read it, but it could be one of the reasons why you didn't get more.
2) Proofreading - This takes time - but I suggest you always read your work out loud. The second sentence actually doesn't make sense. I am not just talking about poor grammar - that's not a big deal. It actually doesn't make sense (and I'm a guitar player)
3) Subheadings are really important because people skim read.
Your first one is " How and Why Company Budgeting Is Hurting Us" - I thought you were going to be talking about financial issues. It's completely inappropriate for the topic. Only 16% of people will read a whole article. You have to use sensible headlines.
Your second one was "Then what happened?" This means nothing - it's a waste of a subheading.
4) Your heading has to match the content. I've read your article 3 or 4 times - which of course I would never do as a reader - but at the end of it - it is still not clear to me which woods provide the best tone. Your heading sounds as if I would find out. If you don't do this correctly people won't bother with your articles in the future.
5) Links. With that length article you could have had 2 links. Always use the maximum you are allowed to increase your chances of people clicking through.
Hope this helps
Regarding your article - These are things you need to think about in the future.
1) The headline. It needs to be compelling and interesting. Yours is:
"The Best Type Of Guitar Wood For Beautiful Tone" - This is grammatically horrible. Don't use headlines like this. I don't know exactly what your keyword is - but here's 3 examples
.
a) 3 Reasons why the best type of guitar wood will guarantee a beautiful tone'
b) 'What you need to know about the best type of guitar wood.
c) Choose the best type of guitar wood will get you the best tone
None of the above are brilliant but they're more enticing than yours. Your headline is important. and if it doesn't entice them people won't carry on reading. I would have stopped at your headline. Obviously some have read it, but it could be one of the reasons why you didn't get more.
2) Proofreading - This takes time - but I suggest you always read your work out loud. The second sentence actually doesn't make sense. I am not just talking about poor grammar - that's not a big deal. It actually doesn't make sense (and I'm a guitar player)
3) Subheadings are really important because people skim read.
Your first one is " How and Why Company Budgeting Is Hurting Us" - I thought you were going to be talking about financial issues. It's completely inappropriate for the topic. Only 16% of people will read a whole article. You have to use sensible headlines.
Your second one was "Then what happened?" This means nothing - it's a waste of a subheading.
4) Your heading has to match the content. I've read your article 3 or 4 times - which of course I would never do as a reader - but at the end of it - it is still not clear to me which woods provide the best tone. Your heading sounds as if I would find out. If you don't do this correctly people won't bother with your articles in the future.
5) Links. With that length article you could have had 2 links. Always use the maximum you are allowed to increase your chances of people clicking through.
Hope this helps
ThatGuyDev
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Awesome! Thank you so much. I've had a much higher work load the past few days but I really appreciate your suggestions and will get to work on them as soon as I have time this week. I definitely agree with most of what you said. Proof reading is a big enemy of mine... That needs to change. Thanks again!
melaniekaren
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hi and nice to meet you :) I just caught your chat with Eward, and I decided to take a look at your website. It's looks great!
I immediately noticed the title about what wood one should have. You know, I've seen a guitar that is made of all fiberglass, and it's colorless and clear. Then there is copper on it too, which makes for a really unique nice sound. -makes for a good synth guitar too! (It's one of my dad's guitars from 1980.)
At any rate, I like your niche and welcome to WA. WA has been very worthwhile for me.
I immediately noticed the title about what wood one should have. You know, I've seen a guitar that is made of all fiberglass, and it's colorless and clear. Then there is copper on it too, which makes for a really unique nice sound. -makes for a good synth guitar too! (It's one of my dad's guitars from 1980.)
At any rate, I like your niche and welcome to WA. WA has been very worthwhile for me.
ThatGuyDev
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Hi melanie! :) Thanks for the kind words, I appreciate that. That sounds like a very interesting guitar! A completely clear guitar is a neat concept in my opinion, being able to look inside and see all the wiring and what-not. I'm glad to hear WA has been beneficial to you, as it certainly has been for myself as well. I'm getting ready to upgrade to Premium, soon. Hopefully it's the kick in the butt I need to get outta my slump.
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