Question: How's my intro?

byteslas

136 followers

Updated 10 years ago

Hello WA community,

This is my first ever post so I'm not even sure if I'm posting my question in the right place.

I was wondering if you can give me some tips and pointers on the introduction I have on my "About Me" page.

Any critiques would be appreciated with a happy face : )

Thanks.

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Welcome to How To Play Electric Guitar!

My name is Tak and I currently live in Tokyo, Japan.

After having attended Berklee College of Music, I moved to Tokyo to pursue a music career.

Currently, I play as a support member for various artists and also write my own songs.

I am also part of a duo I have with my sister (KOKANEE) that will be signing a record deal in 2015.

This website was born out of the pure passion I have for music.

Here, you will be able to learn the ins and outs of playing guitar in the real world.

So, let's get started.

Let there be sound!

http://youtu.be/UoMqKlD_JZQ?list=UUp83nDJWtFStJLAiDaT7inw

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