First site up!

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Hey everyone just got done with my first site! Its gonna need work obviously but I am stoked to say that its finally up and running!! enjoywealthiness.com

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Congrats!

It's good to have things in place, but I am going to give you honest criticism right now. If you are really striving to make this site work, you need to focus on grammar big time. Not just spelling, but punctuation: specifically the positioning and use of punctuation.

In my experience as a consume, I am much more likely to believe what someone is saying, and significantly more likely to buy their product or navigate through their site if their grammar is in check.

Additionally, you never want to do a single paragraph blog entry. Think of it like writing an essay: you want an introduction, body and conclusion in separate paragraphs. Putting everything into one long paragraph tend to discourage a reader from getting to the end of what you're trying to say.

This is your template, and it's a start. That is all well and good, but take what I am saying and apply it. It will go a long way toward creating that appeal you want on your site. This especially applies if your area of focus is financial wellness. Hope this helps, and best of luck to you.

That helps a lot appreciate it!

Just need to build it out now!

Any suggestions

id start with a couple easy 101 type posts/pages and even a introduction who you are what the point of the site is?

those are just daily blogs correct?

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