Posted My Second Post On New Site- Check It Out!

Last Update: February 08, 2014

Hello all,

I just posted my second post on my new site, and would really appreciate it if you could check it out and leave a comment.

http://workathomehow.com/what-is-making-money-online-all-about-how-you-can-get-in-on-it

Let me know what you think!

Thanks a ton

=)

Richie

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alexisnilo Premium
Thanks for sharing, it is a very good post.
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Shmizer Premium
Thank you for reading!

I'm glad you think so :)
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theholygrail Premium
Hey there Richie! Looking good. I see Bis has given you her expertise. She is awesome.
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Thanks!

Yup, sure is =)
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nomda ploom Premium
your style and referencing is great. It is now down to copy writing elements which have already been highlighted. You are then right on your game. Good job, Andy
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Shmizer Premium
Thank you! Glad you think so! =)
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georama Premium
You may seriously consider BIS's suggestions. I like the post short but precise.
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Shmizer Premium
Thank you =)
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BIS Premium
Hi Richie - Glad you're making progress with your new site.

Here's three things you may want to think about.

1. Headline - In my view this was is too long and cumbersome. Just try and keep them a bit shorter "What is making money all about?" would have been quite enough.

2. Put a caption on your image - something like "4.3 trillion sales made each year"

3. Making sure your content matches the headline. Your original headline says What is making money all about and how to get on it. I would say that you never actually answer the second part in your content. I know you have a link to what is going to be a WA affiliate page - but as a reader I feel cheated that I get no information on that page. :) Beverley
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Hey Beverley, thank you for the feedback and taking the time to take a look! =)

1.) Yeah, I thought the same thing, I'll get on it.

2.) Ah, good idea, didn't think of that, thanks!

3.) Hmmm yeah good point. So, you think after my WA affiliate page is complete it will fix that "cheated" feeling? lol

Thank you Beverley as always.

Richie
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