Looking good Richie...

What is making money online is a great choice for your keyword phrase after doing a Jaaxy on it I found out it is highly search but with a very low QSR which is excellent. Good luck

For a keyword phrases search you should add your title within the first 160 characters of your opening statement so it shows up in your meta tag. But other wise your post looks good.

Looks pretty good Richie, nice and easy to read. Maybe flesh out the
"best way to make money online" perhaps with a brief explanation on affiliate marketing.

Thanks for sharing, it is a very good post.

Hey there Richie! Looking good. I see Bis has given you her expertise. She is awesome.

your style and referencing is great. It is now down to copy writing elements which have already been highlighted. You are then right on your game. Good job, Andy

You may seriously consider BIS's suggestions. I like the post short but precise.

Hi Richie - Glad you're making progress with your new site.

Here's three things you may want to think about.

1. Headline - In my view this was is too long and cumbersome. Just try and keep them a bit shorter "What is making money all about?" would have been quite enough.

2. Put a caption on your image - something like "4.3 trillion sales made each year"

3. Making sure your content matches the headline. Your original headline says What is making money all about and how to get on it. I would say that you never actually answer the second part in your content. I know you have a link to what is going to be a WA affiliate page - but as a reader I feel cheated that I get no information on that page. :) Beverley