One of my page content still in progress.
Hi there. How are you doing?
I am getting stuck because of page of my site content now havent done yet. This is the biggest page of my site. By the time I have no idea what to continue on the page, I am decided to make one new post.
Please go and check at http://amazingzon.org
I think, I did my best to explain what I am trying to say. so check out and if not understand what I am saying just drop me comment. I am happy to hear.
Thanks
Seth
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Hi Sethtra,
I have taken a look at your website. Very interesting. I do have some suggestions. For example, change the first sentence on your home page as follows:
My goal here is to bring you an amazing view of my home town for you to visit when you plan your next holiday vacation.
Next, I would move all images so that they appear on the right side of the page.
Next, When I clicked on "What To Do" page, the image should be on the right and you have some text that is not wrapping around the image. Hopefully, when you change it to the right, it will fix this. Otherwise, you may want to change the size of the image so that the text will wrap around the image.
Next, in the "Where To Stay" page, you need to re-read it. You are missing some plurals to some words. Example, in the first sentence the word "room" should be "rooms". Another example is the last sentence in the first paragraph, change the word "with" to "which".
Next, I do not see any links on the home page to some of your other website pages. Try to place those somewhere in the text on the home page. You can direct them to the Where to Stay, or What to See pages. When they land on the page or pages they have been redirected to, you then need to tell them what to do next.
Do any of the hotels in your town have an affiliate program so you could direct the visitor to the hotels website and earn a commission. Otherwise, your site is for information only and you will not earn any money. The whole purpose of being an online marketer is to earn money through a commission or product. Check it out.
If you just want to have your site as informational, list the hotels by name, address, phone number and email. This will help the visitor to make contact with them if they are planning to stay or vacation in your town.
Excellent start. I hope my comments have been helpful to you.
I wish you all the best as a valuable member at WA.
George
Thanks George for your critical examination of the website. Sethtra should try to check things out.
Hello George. Thanks you very much for you value comments. I will check and make change right a way.
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I like it Seth, I understood exactly what you were saying. Left you a comment:)
Thanks you very much Jazmin.