I think 11 is a little over the top, however, (and i may be in the minority with this), but as long as they look natural, than I wouldnt worry with it... keep it the way it is..

Now what you SHOULD do is use that page over and over again. So when you write other pieces of content to add value to yoru site, always find a way to refer people BACK to that review page.

This helps SEO by having internal linking AND helps keep affiliate links off of every page of your site.

Finally, the most important thing about this whole process is that by doing the above, you can tweak and hone and optimze the review page for maximum conversion.

The review page / money page can be a HARD sell on the product, then you provide value with other pages and send that traffic to the money page.

Whoa! Way too many, cut it back to between 2 and 4. Always have one in the first and last paragraphs and if there is an opportunity to fit it in elsewhere do so, but make it follow with the whole conversation.

I think that 11 links is too many, I would limit it to 3 or 4 at the most, and position them carefully. Hope that helps :)

Here's another way to create favicons WordPress Favicons

Marion's training on creating a favicon is good and she gives suggestions for programmes to use.

I've tried the IcoFX to make my first fav and was able to create exactly what I wanted with that. Create a Favicon - What is a Favicon? I haven't gotten around to creating my own logo yet, there is plenty of training here in WA but I'd be interested in any recommendations too.

If you are using Shopify there are many to choose from.
You can check out some here: https://colorlib.com/wp/fashion-shopify-themes/

But to find which one who converts the best you need to dive deep into conversion theories and the use of color and layout

Do you have any ideas as to how you want to build the store, does it need to be compatible with woocommerce etc, thoughts about the layout or what elements you think it needs to be high converting? Just a few things to think about, I'd start to plan your site on paper and then write yourself a 'shopping list' of what your theme needs to have and go from there.

If you google "best theme for online fashion store" or something similar you'll get an idea of what themes might be suitable.

For example this article reviews a good selection:
https://www.inkthemes.com/fashion-ecommerce-store-wordpress-themes/

You may want to try shopify for this. Do you research on it and see if you like it.

I still see at least one copyright image on the page.

You also have less than 10 pages of content. The more content you have the more likely you are to be accepted.

Finally, you just might not have enough traffic to the site yet. The site is obviously still very new and you are building it out. I would suggest to keep building the site out and then reapply once you get some more content and clean up the copyright image (the one with the person pushing a red button).

Marc