About Me Created!
Just finished creating my about me page! Creating quality content is a lot easier than I would have imagined! Can you guys please go over to my site http://homefit.siterubix.com/ and check out my about me to give me any comments or feedback? The site itself is in need of a new theme and format, but at the moment I am just worried about the content in about me itself. Thanks so much and all the best!
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Great job - just one thing, I would consider breaking up the last paragraph, (as it's quite long,) with pictures or video :)
Thank you for the feedback, Jude! I appreciate you taking the time to look at my post and give me suggestions for improvement. I was planning on adding a few more pictures(most likely of me working out or sweaty from a completed workout), so that will be a perfect place to put them! I am loving the lessons here at WA, but the community has been a huge impact on my daily success. Thanks again and have a great day!
Good evening love the detailed descriptions. If I may humbly suggest, speak about your mental state during this time to passionately draw the person further into the journey you have accomplished. Allow them to see themselves within your journey and this will compel them to want to purchase your program and work directly with you.
Thank you so much for the feedback, Yvonne! In my post I did try to hint at my mental state throughout the journey without diving to deep in to it. Some suggestions towards this were my feelings when I first started working out, stopped, and then started working out from home. I do think that I can give my readers a better insight to my mental state throughout the journey, and will make the necessary changes. This was a first draft and I appreciate all suggestions! Thanks again for taking a look at it for me.
Sounds like a plan. You are most welcome.
Looking forward to connecting with you further round the community.
Keep up the awesome job!
I appreciate it! I know I will connect with you further as we both realize our goals and climb the ladder of success :)
Very good page Ryan, have you thought about including a few pictures of you working out to keep the audience interest?
I have in fact! Just need someone to take the pictures for me. Thanks so much for looking at it and giving me input!
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Keep up the good work.
Thanks, Keith!