Would any of you guys be kind enough to glance over my latest post :)
I've just finished a post and wondered if you lovely people wouldn't mind giving it a read and telling me what you think of it. I'll do the same in return.
Thanks in advance
-Pete
http://createwonga.com/how-to-sell-vintage-clothing
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Thanks for your invitation . I had liked your topic very interesting . It seems there is some mistakes for the use of words. I can' t help you . Perhaps someone can do it for you. I use the dictionnary it helps. Good luck ! :)
Hey peeps, thanks for taking the time to have a read!! Thanks so much for the critique also. Pete
I liked the article. It is written very well to get your point across. I usually do not use key words just my own words and experiences. Thank you for sharing.
Far from an expert Pete, but I think it looks great. One thing I might do is maybe use more 'bolded' words to break things up a bit more. Oh and maybe give your links a different colour so they stand out more.
Keep up the excellent work. Btw it was an interesting article too, which is always a plus! :)
Hi Pete
1. first Image should have a caption and be placed on the right - it's breaking up your text. All other images need captions or there's no point in them being there. Watch for the size and the quality.
2. personally don't like the use of offensive - think irritating is better,. Offensive I think is too strong a word.
3. Using contractions would make some of the writing flow better
4. You have a couple of typos - sufficed needs to be change to suffice.
Nice article
one other thing great internal link that goes to your jaaxy promo but I couldn't find your jaaxy affiliate link for you to earn commissions and pictures either link to a new page or not at all. you don't want to click on pictures and they go to a page with just that picture.
Love the post, not to short, not to long. highlights and bullet points. great pictures. One suggestion is to share with your social circles. if your uncomfortable using your personal ones then create new ones for your online business. The more links to your topics that are found on the internet the faster your site will grow.
Great work
just like it on facebook g+ and tweet it from your accounts to get page links around the internet
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Liked your latest post. It is so true I wasted a lot of time on those surveys before I learned I was wasting my time.