Feedback on About Me page please
Could i get some feeback on my about me page please :) I am just getting started, dont have previous experience with writing, and english is not my first language so it is going to be hard!
About Me PAge:
All You Need To Know About KicksVillage
KicksVillage is an amazing, constantly growing platform about streetwear fashion and shoes. We bring you the latest news and deals from the industry as well as reviews of your favourite brands.
Don't be shy and get involve! Comment and like what you see, this page is all about getting engage, learn and grow as a community passionate about urban footwear and fashion.
Pick Your Own Pair
Do You like what you're seeing? Did new collection or and old skool classic caught your eye? If the answer is YES, then grab your own pair today!
Be Brave. Be Yourself.
You will find here everything you need to know. Anything from the latest fashion news to great SALES. All Your favorite brands and designers in one place for you to explore and share. Are you stuck for ideas on what to wear? Are you fed up with constantly going with the "safe" option? You will find blogs and articles on different styles and trends that will help you create your own, unique style. So BE Brave | Be Creative!
If you ever need a hand or have any questions, feel free to leave them below and I will be more than happy to help you out.
All the best,
Recent Comments
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Well written. Sounds exciting. Just a few grammatical mistakes but the content looks good. You can probably check the "grammarly" app. I see lot of folks using it these days which helps their grammar. "Gigikicksvillage" - has this been set up already? I'm unable to open the the webpage.
Wishing you all the best with your endeavor.
Regards,
Suntrupth
Hi and thank you, sorry the website is www.kicksvillage.com nothing on there yet though :) Gigi is the writer nickname :)
Ah.. Website looks very appealing. Congratulations. I'm still contemplating on mine. Look forward to seeing more content :)