have to rethink my goals for earning money here with my start up business
I have to rethink my business goals of how I will be earning money with my start up business. I have two websites that I'm working on, one that is my dream career goal which is to own my very own successful scientific research and technology development center. The other one is dealing with Wealthy Affiliate, and the different reviews that I'm hoping that will start to earn revenue online to help me make my future career goal to come true. I do want to put out here on this blog post that I'm needing help with the community to come check out my websites to give me personal feedback on how my structure of my grammar and designs. Also some comments if you can, please so I can know how effective my websites are being.
First website is http://www.johnathandelevopment.com, and the second one is
http://johnathanleebellbussinessonline.siterubix.com/. Thanks and I will be more happy to return the favor.
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Just have a few minutes, Johnathan. On the dashboard, when you organize your menu, you can put them in order from top to bottom. When someone clicks the first one, they will see the others too. Here goes: My Dream--
Getting Started
How far am I in my Research
My new online business
Next Rattlesnakes
Milking
Biochemistry
The last would be the least looked at by visitors. Terms, Privacy Policy
OR you can do it one by one. But figure the most important that you want people to read on the top right going left. Go down in descending importance. I have mine the first way. You move the curser up and put the next one a little below to the right. My Dream, curser up to the D on Dream to put Getting Started. I will try to take another look later for the grammar and so forth. Looks good. Wow, you know a lot!
Thank you for your great feedback
There are some grammar mistakes, but I would not worry about that a lot. Just read your sentences out loud and listen to what it sounds like to you and many times, you will hear the mistake. Look up Grammarly on Google or Gmail or whatever you have to look things up and get this FREE guide to sentence structure, grammar, spelling and so forth. Make sure you get the FREE one. When you make a mistake in writing, there will be a red link through the word. You hover the cursor over the red line, and you can click on Correct with Grammarly or it will tell you in green, Did you mean? It is easy. I had to use it for my punctuation. In the old days, we use to have a lot of commas. Now they do not. This is most helpful for everyone. My best to you.