Hi Jeff

I went over to your website and the first thing I saw where all the "I"s. You are talking about you all the time. That works ONLY for your about page.
If the page is meant to speak to future customers you would need to make it about them.

If you put some photos in and a different formatting(so it becomes easier to read), it might go as an about page. But if you want to write all this I would suggest to write a short summary on top and then invite people to read more - if they want to.
Good luck!
Heidi

Hi jeff, it is more of a get started article, you actually have put a review in there as well. You might take some of the material and put it into your about page as you also have some of that information mixed in.
The link "click here" to go to wealthy affiliate is not working so you need to fix that.
I know google sniper, and you know it, so why not write a review on it, you have used it, so this would be a good start for you.
These sort of programs are the ones to target as it has a residual income from a membership that is ongoing.
Can help further if you need it.
John