That's an awesome about me page. Good job. The only thing I would change is the last link. When you say "here is a link to my profile", the link should really go to your profile. Instead of using your real affiliate link, you should use this link

https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/jayskilzz

You'll still get credit when people visit that link and join. I've gotten some sales that way.

Hi!

Thank you for sharing your website with us and for asking for feedback.

I definitely like the passion you have in your writing and like the feel of your About Me page. You've done a great job of doing what Kyle taught about making readers feel as though there is a real person behind the website.

I know you said your English isn't really good. Although I think you've done a great job of already getting a good command of writing it, might I suggest finding someone, either here or where you live, that might edit your pages for you for correct English grammar and consistency after you've composed them? Not meant as a criticism, but I feel that readers will be able to better grasp content and meaning if everything is smooth and flowing. Let me know what you think?

Other than that, like I said, I love your "voice" and the passion you bring to the About Me page. As a writer I sometimes lose a little bit of that personality in my attempt to write technically well. I could learn a little something from you. :-)

Good luck and take care,
Heather