Hi Georgia, this is a great start with some valuable and helpful information... maybe think about adding sub-headings to your posts. Great start!!

Nice start. left a comment on the about me page.

Hi Georgia. Well done for getting one of your pages done. There's nothing wrong with your grammar - and you write well, but you do need to change the colour of the font. It's too harsh on the eyes and will stop people reading it. I would advise you to only use blue like that for subheadings or to emphasise words. Also don't embolden every single word.

Good luck :) Beverley

You've done really well :) You have a fast paced conversational style going on that is definitely all your own. That's good, personality is always good :) Just a couple of minor things, I like the blue, but I think it might class a bit with the teal/ green of your headings. Also a couple of pictures would be great, especially for the affiliate link.

I like the template, it's simple which I'm always in favour of and the colours work well. You've got a good basis to move forward from :)