Finished One Themed Page
Hey everyone! how is your weekend going? Just finished one of my themed pages. Working through the bootcamp! Woot! Woot! steadily moving forward!
thought I would post my page, ask for comments, suggestions.
it is not grammatically correct, but I will refine my writing abilities in due process.
stop by leave me a comment! and I will return the favor!
http://nononsensewaytoearnfromhome.com/no-fees-to-work-from-home-online
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Hi Georgia. Well done for getting one of your pages done. There's nothing wrong with your grammar - and you write well, but you do need to change the colour of the font. It's too harsh on the eyes and will stop people reading it. I would advise you to only use blue like that for subheadings or to emphasise words. Also don't embolden every single word.
Good luck :) Beverley
You've done really well :) You have a fast paced conversational style going on that is definitely all your own. That's good, personality is always good :) Just a couple of minor things, I like the blue, but I think it might class a bit with the teal/ green of your headings. Also a couple of pictures would be great, especially for the affiliate link.
I like the template, it's simple which I'm always in favour of and the colours work well. You've got a good basis to move forward from :)
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Hi Georgia, this is a great start with some valuable and helpful information... maybe think about adding sub-headings to your posts. Great start!!