Help Please !!!
Last Update: July 04, 2013
Hello all I am looking for some thoughts on this article....
Does it flow well, it follows a good path it does not jump around? Easy to read, enough fishing info to get started fishing at this location...
What do you guys think...
Thanks for your thoughts appreciated... http://69.siterubix.com/sample-page
Tim
Does it flow well, it follows a good path it does not jump around? Easy to read, enough fishing info to get started fishing at this location...
What do you guys think...
Thanks for your thoughts appreciated... http://69.siterubix.com/sample-page
Tim
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Dforbes
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Hi Tim
I like your writing style, but I'm not exactly sure what you're attempting to achieve. If you're just trying to tell us a bit about your fishing trip then ok, but if you're writing for marketing purposes it would seem better to break this up into three short spicy pieces: 1. your trip down the river; 2. the fishing experience; and 3. the cooking and eating experience. Hope this helps pal
I like your writing style, but I'm not exactly sure what you're attempting to achieve. If you're just trying to tell us a bit about your fishing trip then ok, but if you're writing for marketing purposes it would seem better to break this up into three short spicy pieces: 1. your trip down the river; 2. the fishing experience; and 3. the cooking and eating experience. Hope this helps pal
jghwebbrand
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fishing,
Your article is good reading. I do have a question. What is your objective? Are you trying to make some commissions with this article? Or, just wanted to write something on a subject that you know?
As an online marketer, you always want to try to make some money or a commission by selling something to the visitors to your site where your article is.
If this is just your first page of many, then you are off to a great start.
Wish you the best!
Your article is good reading. I do have a question. What is your objective? Are you trying to make some commissions with this article? Or, just wanted to write something on a subject that you know?
As an online marketer, you always want to try to make some money or a commission by selling something to the visitors to your site where your article is.
If this is just your first page of many, then you are off to a great start.
Wish you the best!