I like it as I am concerned with the number of words google wants as I am straight and to the point person and on paper. Most people are saying short and straight to the point but I do not know what google says about this. Does any body know what number of words google is looking for?

I liked it, you misspelled ounce. And 5th paragraph should be saw not seen. You might enhance the results a bit. Yeah, I know you are there to fish, but part of the fishing is the eating. Make that as enjoyable an experience for your reader as it was for you.

Got any pictures of the pictographs? Got any pictures of the lake? Result Pictures? How about a big Walleye..

I really enjoyed your writing, makes me want to get into the truck, update my passport and drive up there for a visit. Know anyone with a boat?

Hi Tim
I like your writing style, but I'm not exactly sure what you're attempting to achieve. If you're just trying to tell us a bit about your fishing trip then ok, but if you're writing for marketing purposes it would seem better to break this up into three short spicy pieces: 1. your trip down the river; 2. the fishing experience; and 3. the cooking and eating experience. Hope this helps pal

I liked it ---keep it up.

I Liked it for sure---keep up the good work!!!

fishing,

Your article is good reading. I do have a question. What is your objective? Are you trying to make some commissions with this article? Or, just wanted to write something on a subject that you know?

As an online marketer, you always want to try to make some money or a commission by selling something to the visitors to your site where your article is.

If this is just your first page of many, then you are off to a great start.

Wish you the best!

Liked it, good storyline and kept me interested,
Regards
Hudson.