Hi Tim
I like your writing style, but I'm not exactly sure what you're attempting to achieve. If you're just trying to tell us a bit about your fishing trip then ok, but if you're writing for marketing purposes it would seem better to break this up into three short spicy pieces: 1. your trip down the river; 2. the fishing experience; and 3. the cooking and eating experience. Hope this helps pal

I liked it ---keep it up.

I Liked it for sure---keep up the good work!!!

fishing,

Your article is good reading. I do have a question. What is your objective? Are you trying to make some commissions with this article? Or, just wanted to write something on a subject that you know?

As an online marketer, you always want to try to make some money or a commission by selling something to the visitors to your site where your article is.

If this is just your first page of many, then you are off to a great start.

Wish you the best!

Liked it, good storyline and kept me interested,
Regards
Hudson.