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here http://madefromcoconut.com/about-me. Please feel free to comment as my writing is not good, so I can improve.
Could you please look about about me that I just finished?
here http://madefromcoconut.com/about-me. Please feel free to comment as my writing is not good, so I can improve.
Hi there. I just had a read of your about me page and yes, the language is a little broken in places. However I could understand what you were talking about. I think perhaps writing your articles into a piece of software like Microsoft Word might help you. Also you would benefit from having a couple of pictures on your page too. Perhaps an image of yourself so that we can see what you look or a photo of the places that you are talking about on your site.
I look forward to reading more from you!
All the best,
By the way, I'm also a big fan of Coconut water!
Andrew
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I just made video in I want honest feedback on this video, so I can improve, please feel free to tell me even a negative one.
Purpose of this video is provide visual de
Nice video.
Pros:
1) I like the music
2) the end product looks really good
Cons:
1) the descriptions are gone way too fast (I couldn't read through them)
2) video quality is quite low (not HD)
3) the preparation is definitely not for everybody in the western civilization
Well done!
Kay
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Could you provide honest feedback in my video?
I just made video in I want honest feedback on this video, so I can improve, please feel free to tell me even a negative one.
Purpose of this video is provide visual de
Nice video.
Pros:
1) I like the music
2) the end product looks really good
Cons:
1) the descriptions are gone way too fast (I couldn't read through them)
2) video quality is quite low (not HD)
3) the preparation is definitely not for everybody in the western civilization
Well done!
Kay
See more comments
Hi there. I just had a read of your about me page and yes, the language is a little broken in places. However I could understand what you were talking about. I think perhaps writing your articles into a piece of software like Microsoft Word might help you. Also you would benefit from having a couple of pictures on your page too. Perhaps an image of yourself so that we can see what you look or a photo of the places that you are talking about on your site.
I look forward to reading more from you!
All the best,
By the way, I'm also a big fan of Coconut water!
Andrew
Thank you very much Andrew
You're very welcome!