Well i totally pulled it apart and restarted!
Well I jumped right in ,got a new site name and started again, for this my 3rd website build. Spent many hours on it but as I went along I just felt something was not quite right which is very frustrating, so today actually last night in bed, I decided it must be the theme that was bugging me, I knew that my review writing needed work but I believed the theme was my biggest and my front page welcome. Well today I have changed both theme and written out a new welcome page and feedback on the look would be appreciated. Although I have credit for reviews I have done on other sites I still believe I have a ways to go before I present it to that particular department. Your comments good and particularly bad most welcome, I am interested more so in the front page but you are of course welcome to look over the rest of the site if you wish. Many thanks in advance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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OK - found a few things you may want to consider. Hope these comments help and God Bless!
The green font hurts and it's hard to read (3rd paragraph).
The first 3 paragraphs tell me what you do ... but nothing on that page tells me what to do. There are no internal links in this blog blog; there are no lists of things (bullet points, for example) of ways your site can help me and there are no details or any action steps you provide so I can make an informed decision (and feel good about it).
Having said all this ... i really LOVE your image (logo?) and i really LOVE your "Let's Build It" title. (there should be an apostrophe between the "t" and the "s" in Let's).
...The crazy thing about IM is we are always revamping, writing and tweaking. And crazier that we all enjoy it so much! :-)
well well !!!!!!!!! I guess I have been overworking as I have totally forgotten to leave the HRL for my site, here it is SORRY!!!!
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Isn't it strange how most ideas come to you when your head hits the pillow...lol!
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