About me page done. Thoughts please...
I am looking for feedback today on my about me page on my site. I move at a snails pace and this was my goal for the day and I'm finally done. Please let me know what you think. It won't hurt my feelings if you don't like it, just please add suggestions if you don't as that helps me see from another perspective. I may change it all, I may change nothing. I would definitely like to know what you think though. I think this is the right link:
http://weightlosssupplementadvice.siterubix.com/about-me
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Hey Yonna, Your personality shines in your writing so that's great! Too often people's content I read is as dry as some ashy feet. But that's not the case here. That said I agree Grace-ann that it could be a bit shorter. An about me page should basically give a little glimpse into who you are and why people should trust what your write. I hope that makes sense and helps.
Great advice Eddy thanks! I've listened to you long enough to know you won't sugar coat, and I'm grateful for honesty. I hope you and grace will chime in on the redo in progress.
Good details, but I think it is a bit lengthy for an About Me page you could put some of the info in another blog for your website, maybe in a Welcome Page.
thanks gracesystem for the feedback and the suggestion! Thats exactly the reason I wanted reviews. I appreciate that!
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Hi Yonna,
It's good ... your sincerity and honesty come out. Yeah ... some of those "clense" products go too far. If you own the domain, I would transfer your site. Kyle goes through that process in Lesson 1, Certification Course 2. If you do not own the domain (weightlosssupplementadvice.com) he explains that process here: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/website-development-programming/how-to-choose-a-proper-domain-name.
I think one of the big attractions to your site will be the content you start putting on your review page. This could turn out to be keyword heaven.
Thanks! That domain wasn't available but I do now own weightlosssupplementfunfacts.com. yaay!!! Please check out my proteins page under the ingredient tab and let me know your thoughts. Just finished that today. Thanks!
It's very informative and you have a great sense of humor. This kind of writing will have great appeal ... it's friendly. I still feel visuals will help break up a long post, make it easier to read, and best of all tend to hold your visitors. Not sure what images make sense ... maybe some appropriate clip art.
You're on a roll Yonna ... keep up the good work.
Hi Braky! What is the updated site, i tried both above but giving me a database error.