Critique My Post Please

byBonnieMyers1

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5 years ago

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As a new member, the first thing I saw was the comment section on my Post. I was asked if I wanted comments then it said I don't have enough coins. So I found out how to get coins and began to read other peoples post. I love to read, but some of the articles are hard to get through.

Then I asked if someone would look at my Post and tell me if the spelling was right and if the article flowed. Usually I would ask my sister to do this for me but her eye are not as good as they used to be. She majored in English so she was really good at being non-judgemental about what I write

I had enough coins to put my article up for inspection. This is always frightening. You are asking a person not to judge your work, and of course I know that what I wrote about everyone would be interested in, and the person would come back with a raving review.

Hush my thoughts. She/he came back not with a critique of my post but of my entire web page. I knew my Web page was not done yet, but holly cow, it really wasn't done right. I didn't get my post polished up like I wanted.

The give and take Comments

Now here is a catch. At the end of one of the lesson 2 articles in training we are supposed to ask people in the give and take for comments on our posts, and this one didn't cost any coin.

I jumped on this. I have been in WA for a little over a month. But this was great, all I had to do was critique 3 other peoples post and then they would do mine. I did!

But that wasn't right, I got told all the people wanted on this program was for me to make a comment directly on their post its self. Oh boy talking about making a fool of myself. I went back in and made nice on all the comment areas of the areas that I read.

Conclushion

I still don't know if my article read smoothly or if I missed a, and, at, the, so, etc. in my post. And no where have I read that these two areas are to be treated differently. So I thought I would throw it out there for everyone to look at and tell me what they think.

Bonnie