My First Post on my first website!
Hi all,
I thought I would share with you the progress that I have made in the two weeks I have been with you all. I have completed the "Let's get started" training and the first stage of bootcamp. I have now got my own website with my first full post! You can check this out below! Still a lot of work needed in terms of building the content on my site but it is simple with the theme but I am hoping it is effective.
http://myentrepreneurialworld.com/wealthy-affiliat...
If any of you kind people wish to take a read and provide any feedback you feel is useful please let me know. I am always looking to improve my site and steadily grow my online business :)
Thank you in advance :)
Adam
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Hello Adam
Had a looksee and you have a couple of things you can improve one.
Your Review Page is ok but I would make it the same as your other pages.
Your Starter/Premium pic is far too close to the last line of text and you need to close up those gaps - as I said the layout would be better like those other pages.
I would also get rid of that second menu bar you have at the top of the screen and change the light blue colour to a more suitable one
(people who are near sighted will never be able to read the Headings)
You also don't need that Meta section on your Sidebar.
Much better you set that up within your Wordpress if in fact you think you actually need it.
I would also move your Privacy Page into the Sidebar as its taking up space where it is. (you will find as you add to your site that space is at a premium - use it wisely).
I would also suggest you get yourself a Disclaimer page if only to cover your butt.
It is a good enough site though Adam it just needs these little adjustments.
Have a nice day.
Robert
Nice to meet you Adam,
I think your review is detailed and I can see that you put time into it which is a great thing... what I would recommend is putting some more images in it, it will help engage your readers more.
Oh and also use the SiteComment feature to get some comments there.
https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/websites/comments/requests
I look forward to hear more about your progress.
Cheeers!
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Thank you both for the feedback! The spacing with the paragraphs is proving to be a nightmare as when I type them up in Wordpress they are grammatically perfect but it doesn't transfer to the page...and I an going to change the header too. Still learning with moving the page around but it's a work in progress.
Thank you both for taking the time to read my blog though.
Adam
Hello. Its that extra Header Menu Bar at the very top of your screen you should get rid asap. Surplus to requirements and very off-putting.
What you want to do is when you have an article in Edit Mode you place your cursor at the end of the last word in a paragraph and use your Delete Key once. The next paragraph should come up.
It might not look right but it should be ok. Click Update then you view your page by clicking on the - View Page - at the top of your screen while still in Edit Mode. (very useful to use this function to move between screens without actually coming out of Edit Mode)
If it doesn't work that way then you place your cursor between paragraphs and again use the Delete key Once.
Wordpress can be a wee bit tricky until you get the hang of it.
Robert