Squido Lens I'm Tweaking
I'm working on a few lenses over at Squido. One I just finished was for a clickbank program I signed up for as an affiliate to help folks stop smoking. The lens is raw and needs a LOT of work but I'd appreciate feedback and constructive criticism.
Thanks a bunch!
http://www.squidoo.com/guaranteedquitsmoking
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Man that's what I wanted! Ok, I'll be hitting you up via email shortly. And thanks for the honest feetback my friend. :)
Hey,
Honestly, I dont beleive the information in the lens. It is boring and it needs to be broken up a lot. Less is more sort of thing. Give them what they need to know, and then send them on the the product. T
Put some more pictures up so that it keeps attention, and looks a little more interesting.
I don't see any keyword usage. Would you like help finding your keywords?
I can help you, PM me and we can talk.
I think you are wasting to much time, working on things that dont matter, I was in the same boat when I started too, so its no big deal, but you cant do a lot better with a little bit of help.
Let me know(:
It seems to be the same thing repeated over and over again, not sure about the strategy about posting amazon links when your aiming to sell a clickbank product. To be completely honest within thirty seconds I was scanning the whole lens looking for a way out