Never overload your posts with me, I, we. These words make your customer feel that it is all about you and not them. Remember the most important person in your business is the customer, not you so make sure words like you and your are used more often that me and we.

The visitors to your website are looking for information. They want to know what features your product has. They want to know what is in it for them. What advantages will your product give them that other products don't have? Tell your customers about the benefits they will get with your product. That is all your visitor is interested in, what is in it for them.

If the person reading your post is looking to make their final decision whether to buy your product or not you have your best chance of making a sale. Talking about yourself will send them looking elsewhere.

Step into your customer's shoes and think about what it is they really want to know. Do they really need to know you made $500 in a day? They don't. They want to know how they can make $500 in a day

Your customers don't want to know how you benefited unless you relate it to them so use less me, I, we and more of you and your.