Would like some feedback on my review

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Hey guys, I've made a review on my favourite mechanical keyboard (Das Keyboard 4 Professional) and would like some feedback on it. I really want this to be a post which actually generates me revenue, so it's important that I have it right.

http://thepcprogrammer.com/2015/03/das-keyboard-review/

Tell me what you think and if there is anthing I should improve on, thanks a lot!

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Tim, I really like how thorough you were in your review. How you broke everything down and explained the inns and outs of every feature. Nice!

Thanks a lot!

Welcome. I left a comment on your website

ya know if the keyboard is sold on amazon,go look at its reviews,and if say 50 people love it,you could use those stats,and say something like the majority of customers who purchased this tablet on amazon would recommend it.

Awesome idea, thanks a lot. Do you think taking screenshots of the reviews would be good? Like a short snippet of the beginning of the review.

i read your whole site very interesting, so my old clicky keyboard was what is now called mechanical? could i go back and find a old one and it be as good as the new expensive ones?
i am a gamer and i liked the way you included us in your keyboard analysis

The old IBM models are mechanical. You can see if your keyboard is mechanical by taking off one of the keys and seeing what's underneath. If it's rubber then it will be a rubber dome keyboard, if it has switches (may look like crosses), then it will be mechanical and also it might have springs underneath the keys in which it is a special type of mechanical keyboard known as a 'buckling spring' keyboard.
Glad you like my site, thanks!

i used to have keyboard that had metal parts under the keys,was like in the shape of a 7 and it was a pain to take off the keys and get them back on but they did make that nice click click sound,.

and everyone does love this keyboard very little post bad about it,
so you could use those stats to enforce your statement,i just looked on amazon,

i review for amazon,and I review tablets,and alot of other items. The thing i would say,is you just saying you believe its the best because of your opinion,is not a good review,
why do you believe that?
what makes it different from other keyboards?
what makes it better quality?
how is the price compared to others?
how is the warranty compared to others.?
what makes this such a good bargain and good keyboard.
I have found our opinion is not enough. You must back it up with reasons.
Hope i have helped.Lisa
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Ok, thanks for your feedback. I will change my review to meet what you said. So would it be ok if I said something like "I and many others, feel like this is one of the best mechanical keyboards out there"? Since I'm referring to other people, would this make it better? What about, "The Das Keyboard is known to be the best mechanical keyboards due to their simplistic design and high-quality build" or something, help I'm terrible at making reviews...

well it is like i ask the tablet people i review for, when they make generalized statements,who is these people you are refering to?
now if you said i an computer gaming weekly both feel this keyboard is awesome that would be better,. it lets me know your not just blowing smoke

Hmm.. Ok. I think I know what you mean. I have adjusted the review slightly, could you see if it is any better? thanks! http://thepcprogrammer.com/2015/03/das-keyboard-review/
I've only adjusted the scentences which were like "In my opinion..." so it is less about my opinion and more about why the keyboard is epic.

if i had the money i would pull out my credit card,and that is what your shooting for,;] great job.

i want to confess when i first looked at page, i thought the whole review was the top only, i did not think to scroll down cause i seen nothing to warrant me scrolling down,bad me;] but on this one,it shows me to scroll down. So you have now noob proofed it as well.
lol

ok i am going to play devils advocate, god i hope you do not hate me for this,
i went and read the only 4 negative reviews, looking at all the positive reviews i probably would still buy it but i always look at negatives to,maybe you could address those negatives to make the consumer feel better about what i consider a very expensive keyboard.
i am all about tweaking my system,my computer costs more than my car,but keyboard is something i neglect cause well ,its a keyboard,and 169 dollars for one it better be awesome .So to get a cynic like me, you would need to make me feel better about the negatives listed on amazon through your link. So i am like hmm ok, i trust this guys opinion and he explains away those negatives ,so i will spend this on the keyboard.

Yep, I'll do that. Thanks so much, you've been incredibly helpful, doing more than I asked for :D
Do you think I should put screenshots of some of the Amazon reviews? I think this would make it more effective, and it shouldn't go against copyright or anything as I'm using them to help promote the product and the people that write them are writing them for the internet to help people out so it should be ok. What do you think?

i think photos would be ok or links to the reviews you like you can get a perma link off one you really like if you wanted to.
or just a picture showing how many rated it number 5 and how many had bad reviews of 1,which is only like 4.

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