Can you please have a look at my website and comment on it
I have been busy working on my website and I need to have someone else to look at it and tell me what they think. Self critic is to soft
Please have a look and give me your comments. goto http://stydynetworkmarketing.com
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Hello Rich908
This is an old webpage of mine. Here is the new one http://howtoavoidscam.com
Your website gives sound information - but I found it difficult to follow one article as my attention was being drawn to another article on the right hand side.
Is there another way around this - I am thinking of your readers who my have short attention spans?
feel free to give feedback on mine - I still have a lot to tweak
http://howtolivealifewithpurpose.com/
Will someone please look at my website and tell me everything wrong, don't hold back. http://worldsbeststopprimeshopping.com
Thank you Vgomer for taking the time an have a look at my website. And thank you for your comments and specially pointing out the typos, I am not very good in English spelling.
Yeah it worked this time. Your website looks great - I like the structure and layout and the colours too. Please go through it and fix any typos - a big one is at the top of your website in your title: 'How to make money onlline'... should read 'online'. Hope you have much success with your website.
ahhhh, thats why , we all make mistakes its all good, I do like your site, youve accomplished alot so soon!
Hello Thor, I just posted a comment, but it didn't seem to go through. I think my Internet signal went down at the wrong moment. so I'm going to attempt to rewrite what I told you. If there is a duplicate then I apologize. What I had attempted to tell you was that I liked the way you appealed to the reader by including detailed information about the community here at WA. That's a very good idea. Let people know they can belong to something great. I do want to point out that there are some grammatical and spelling errors, but other than that what you have written is well thought out and well put together. You might want to include a little more white space in the format to keep the reader from drifting... I hope you don't take what I'm suggesting as too critical. It's just advice. I can see the hard work you have put into your website and am impressed. Keep up the good work! Oh and you can edit the blog above to include the correct url to your site. Good luck with everything Thor! Sincerely, Mrs Glarner!
Hello Mrs Glarner and thank you very much for your time and help. I am very pleased with what you pointed out to me and i have all ready done some changes. Thank you again. What a great community this is. Nice to have a someone to get help from.
hello thor, I tried to get into it but it wont go, go back and republish it, also try a www. instead of http address, mine is www.scamfreewealth.com
Hello Thor
I have read your website now. I think it is very well written. The layout is perfect. I congratulate you on your fantastic site! If I my come with a personal opinion: I think the paragraphs on the home page are a bit long. Maybe you could split it a little more, that may make it easier to read. That is only my opinion, others may not be bothered by long paragraphs.
You wrote "People trying to sell you something that is no good. It is called SPAM." You probably meant SCAM.
A very small spelling error on the Reviews page: correct "vile" to "while".
Congratulations on a very professional and great website!
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