My first blog: My first Street Article has been published!
MY FIRST SUBMISSION TO STREET ARTICLES HAS BEEN APPROVED AFTER ONLY ONE CORRECTION!!!! Whew! finally got'r dun. Please check out "Fast Motorcycle Tires - Does it come down to more than motorcycle tire construction?" and tell me what you think. Be brutally honest folks. It's a tad longer than 400 words but It's cut down as much as possible. Oh well, tomorrow it will be time to submit another. Gotta keep movin.
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Hi Kenny. You are welcome, you should start share your article on Facebook, G+ ... I just share it for you on my Facebook so any of my friends who like bike might take a look. A good start buddy!
hey Cena thanks for the idea and the share. I am getting into the swing of this. I shared it on my FB and finally got G+ to work. I'm diggin this.
okay, dude! That article is "da bomb"! It is very well done. The only "criticism" I can offer is that calling out your Basics topics as sub-headings in the article. Something like:
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3. Suspensions
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Or something along those lines. But, as I said, AWESOME!! You'll keep people coming back and clicking!!
Feemo
Thx doc. I do have several ways in which I write and what you're suggesting is one of them so I definitely understand what you mean. I kind of wanted this "attempt" to feel more like a conversation rather than a lesson. Not sure if I accomplished that but it's a learning process. Please tune in again for future articles. I can always use the feedback.
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Hey Boss...that's great news! Congrats! It's an awesome feeling of accomplishment!
Thx sidekick. I'm doing my best and praying that it pays off.