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Here is my website still in progress can you guys be so kind to give me a little feedback.
THANKS http://onlinesuccessor.com/
Looks good to me. Just there's nothing in the blog section, just "OOPS! THAT PAGE CAN’T BE FOUND."
The rest is fine, fine theme, nice explanations. I like ti.
Had a look at your site and read the first post on the WA-scam-review thoroughly, here are some issues I found with it:
1. Spelling of important products is wrong - JAXXY is JAAXY
2. you might like to add in a word to your first line in your "FINAL COMMENT" paragraph
3. TOOLS AT WEALTH AFFILIATE needs checking for spelling (or a typo)
4. quite a few other spelling errors
Overall the post reads very well, your comments are well made, it is written sufficiently well to entice someone to read the whole post
That is what you want.
I am not an expert on typing and spelling but I hate it when I get mine wrong (and I do) but I do fix it when I find an error.
Steve
Hey Brett,
I have left a comment on your post as requested, any chance you can leave me a comment:
http://beactiveinretirement.com/importance-of-exercise-as-you-get-older
thanx Steve
Thank's steve .
Being a carpenter for 20 years my grammar is very poor .I have installed Grammarly but this is obviously not as thorough as another person actually reading it.
I have changed these mistakes and will have a look at your website soon.
Thank's for the feedback
Hi Brett, Your site looks good. Just add more content and add some call to action links and make them bold so people can easily see them. Remember, most visitors don't read content. They just scan it and leave sites. Try to use WA comparison table. It does help increase conversions.
If you need more feedback idea you can use this option
https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/website-feedback
Thanks Rufat will look at this I have been a bit busy and the internet has been down for the last 2 days
Hey, What you have done so far is totally fine, Your content is great may be a little brief but that isn't a bad thing.
You are on track I would add some posts to help fill out your home page
I left you a comment as well
Hi there Ramseyman,
I will be looking at your website in the next day or so and send you a review.
Derek
http://thetruthaboutobesity.com
Onwards and Upwards !! TO INFINITY !!! and BEYOND !!!
I really liked the feel of your site. I can tell you it was a bit confronting seeing the home page, I wasn't expecting a scam review. I want through the rest of your pages & I like the overall colour scheme, especially on your Getting Started page. I think it presents very well Brett, well done.
Thank's Linda the scam review is just a low QSR keyword with a hit you in the face approach, as "scam" was the keyword that put me onto wealthy affiliate in the first place. Thanks again for your time
Yes. I agree. The title threw me off. I had a negative outlook of WA right off because of the title. I read an article last night that talks about how seeing a negative or harsh image actually has an impact on the next image/article you see. It's like bad aftertaste of castor oil jusr before a savory bite of a New York Style Cheesecake with blueberries. I realize this isn't an image it's a title. Same concept I would think.
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Coudl I have some site feedback please ?
Here is my website still in progress can you guys be so kind to give me a little feedback.
THANKS http://onlinesuccessor.com/
Looks good to me. Just there's nothing in the blog section, just "OOPS! THAT PAGE CAN’T BE FOUND."
The rest is fine, fine theme, nice explanations. I like ti.
Had a look at your site and read the first post on the WA-scam-review thoroughly, here are some issues I found with it:
1. Spelling of important products is wrong - JAXXY is JAAXY
2. you might like to add in a word to your first line in your "FINAL COMMENT" paragraph
3. TOOLS AT WEALTH AFFILIATE needs checking for spelling (or a typo)
4. quite a few other spelling errors
Overall the post reads very well, your comments are well made, it is written sufficiently well to entice someone to read the whole post
That is what you want.
I am not an expert on typing and spelling but I hate it when I get mine wrong (and I do) but I do fix it when I find an error.
Steve
Hey Brett,
I have left a comment on your post as requested, any chance you can leave me a comment:
http://beactiveinretirement.com/importance-of-exercise-as-you-get-older
thanx Steve
Thank's steve .
Being a carpenter for 20 years my grammar is very poor .I have installed Grammarly but this is obviously not as thorough as another person actually reading it.
I have changed these mistakes and will have a look at your website soon.
Thank's for the feedback
Hi Brett, Your site looks good. Just add more content and add some call to action links and make them bold so people can easily see them. Remember, most visitors don't read content. They just scan it and leave sites. Try to use WA comparison table. It does help increase conversions.
If you need more feedback idea you can use this option
https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/website-feedback
Thanks Rufat will look at this I have been a bit busy and the internet has been down for the last 2 days
Hey, What you have done so far is totally fine, Your content is great may be a little brief but that isn't a bad thing.
You are on track I would add some posts to help fill out your home page
I left you a comment as well
Hi there Ramseyman,
I will be looking at your website in the next day or so and send you a review.
Derek
http://thetruthaboutobesity.com
Onwards and Upwards !! TO INFINITY !!! and BEYOND !!!
I really liked the feel of your site. I can tell you it was a bit confronting seeing the home page, I wasn't expecting a scam review. I want through the rest of your pages & I like the overall colour scheme, especially on your Getting Started page. I think it presents very well Brett, well done.
Thank's Linda the scam review is just a low QSR keyword with a hit you in the face approach, as "scam" was the keyword that put me onto wealthy affiliate in the first place. Thanks again for your time
Yes. I agree. The title threw me off. I had a negative outlook of WA right off because of the title. I read an article last night that talks about how seeing a negative or harsh image actually has an impact on the next image/article you see. It's like bad aftertaste of castor oil jusr before a savory bite of a New York Style Cheesecake with blueberries. I realize this isn't an image it's a title. Same concept I would think.
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Can I use Wealthy Affiliate images from google even if they are not labelled for reuse. I wanted to put one on my feature post page ?
This site gives information on creating your own images with Canva. How to create your own images . Using WA images could run afoul of a ruleset somewhere.
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Can I use wealthy affiliate google images?
Can I use Wealthy Affiliate images from google even if they are not labelled for reuse. I wanted to put one on my feature post page ?
This site gives information on creating your own images with Canva. How to create your own images . Using WA images could run afoul of a ruleset somewhere.
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Hi Ramsey, I have left a comment. Irv.
Thanks Irvine