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I'm still trying to get this page moved over to the menu on the side, but let me know if the copy needs adjusting. I did see that the images & such shifted, so that will be the next edit also... thanks

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Great advice from George below.

All the best
Mojalefa.

Hi,

I have looked at your site. I recommend the following suggestions:
1). Create a separate "Contact" page and remove the contact from the page you posted.
2). Create an "About" page telling your visitors something about yourself and why you are giving them help on balloons.
3). Remove the Comments from the side bar and place it at the bottom of the page. This is natural.
4). The background color for the text is usually white which makes it easier to read. I don't know if you can change the color.
5). The box where you have NO FRILLS = STREAMERS should stand out. Because of the color it does not.
6). Add an internal link to another page on your site.
7). Add an external link outside your site like Wikipedia
8). Lastly, if possible, try to have the last sentence of the page show up under the image. As this sentence seems out of place.

I hope this helps.

Best wishes,

George

Morning. Thanks George for the insight. Now I just have to figure out how to actually do your suggestions. (heeheehee). That side menu was giving me all sorts of issues last night.

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