Laying it on the line
First of all I must get something off of my chest. My grammar is not good at all. I usually get my punctuation's and commas wrong and even my spelling might be wrong sometime. But I am not going to let that bother me simply because I am taken care of. And I am certainly not trying to go back to school, get a job, open up a business, or try to impress people to make them think that I am smart or I really have it going on. I refuse to live a lie like that. Now if I was about let's say 16-25 I would probably pull a stunt like that. I am influenced by a higher power someone that loves me no matter what. Some people call, Lord, God, Jesus. No matter which name I call on I always get good feedback. Before those 3 names came into my life I was out there serving that old Devil with a passion until one day I woke up from surgery from almost losing my life battling Throat Cancer. My throat was cut from ear to ear and my voicebox was removed. I lost my dignity my sense of smell I had to eat through a feeding tube for almost 2 years this was a valuable learning experience for me. Now you all are probably asking yourself what does this have to do with Wealthy Affiliate? In order for me to make money I have to be willing to take certain risks because my mobility is limited as to what I can and can't do. So hopefully by me telling some of my life changing experiences with others it could inspire me or maybe one of you to write a book about your experience. Of course my book would be a best seller and it sure would get the attention of some big hollywood producers. I try hard not to share too much with readers but I want you to understand that it is, " okay to be you because the fact is, none of us are perfect." If there are any writer's out there I am willing to sit down with you and maybe we can make that book happen.
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We're all in this together, msberdia. We won't let each other down. We shall ALL prosper. Take care.
msberdia,
I enjoyed reading what you wrote here but next time do use paragraphs to make reading a lot easier especially when you decide to write your book.
Good to see that you have a very positive outlook, something vital for possible business success which being a member here should help you achieve provided you do the step by step training taking action along the way.
All the very best to you msberdia.
Stephen & Jennifer.
okay, but my problem is I do not know when to stop writing. My eye sight is very poor and what I said I meant it.
That's okay. Just write it all out until you are done. Then when you are done writing, just add a space after every 3-4 sentences.
Writing books is the same way. But again, you can do that kind of simple editing after you are done writing. That way you won't lose your train of thought. :)
This way there is some white space and not one large paragraph. Without breaks, many people will not even read it all the way through.
It is hard on the eyes (some of us have poor eyesight and high prescription glasses and prone to eyestrain and headaches from eyestrain) and if a person loses concentration or gets distracted, then they will lose their place among a sea of text.
It is difficult to read an extremely large piece of text that has no white space after every few sentences.
You don't want your message lost because people cannot or will not read your writing all the way through until the end.
I can't hardly see.
I had to re-write all of this 4 times before I got it up to my standards.
But I hear what you are saying I am going to really take your advice because I know you are being very nice to me. Thank You!
Your words here will be encouragement to others. It takes some courage to say what you have. To say, this is me and this is what i am is real instead of hiding behind a mask as some do. I wish you all the very best in what you aim to achieve in your business!
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Thank You all so much.