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I'm not a writer, I work in dark boiler rooms by myself, and don't have time to hang out with friends anymore. I do not get a lot of social practice and I'm afraid that it will affect the quality of my content.
I'm looking to improve the quality of my content writing and need your help. I want honest feedback no matter how harsh you might think it is. "Good Job" or "Looks Good" is nice to hear but doesn't help me to improve my communication skills.
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Hi MGroesbeck:
Very nice color palette; I haven't seen it before. It's very easy on the eyes. I think I am using the default black and white palette. Is this hard to change later?
I definitely agree with you about breakfast and bbq. We don't bbq as much anymore. We've never had a smoker; what does that do for the food.
By the way, I've seen that ad for belly fat(on the left side of your site) many times in other places. What affiliate is that one?
I'm still on course 3 lesson 3. I've stopped to get the rest of my articles written since Kyle pointed out that before you join any affiliate, you should have a fairly complete web site.
How do you get people to subscribe to your blog and where do those tags come from? Is it necessary that those tags are visible to the user?
Overall, looks good.
That's a lot of questions. :) As for the smoker, It can be used to preserve meat, cook tougher meats, and add a natural smoke flavor to your food which I love.
The add on the left is not an affiliate, it is an Ad Sense link that allows me to advertise unrelated products that have been searched by the viewer.
So far I don't have anyone subscribing to my blog. The tags I create so it is easier for viewers to find a niche within my niche and it groups all my post with the particular tag together. I believe the tags are a helpful tool.
I just checked out your two sites. One has two sections of 'undefined index' at the top. Maybe that is a work in progress. The other looks great. My partner makes his pizza dough the same way. (ps yeast isn't normally classified as self rising.)
I am a spelling freak (and I often make them)! I think the abreviation for advertisement is ad not add.
The one site I have had nothing but problems with it so I quit it. Thank you for the info on the yeast. I don't know how I didn't catch that. Where did you find the add mistake.
Somewhere! I looked over your site and now can't find it. People will get your drift anyway.
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I like the way you write, it's like your talking directly to me and not a generic audience, I do personally like it when articles open in a new window so I don't lose my place and can reference multiple ones in different tabs instead of hitting the home button and scrolling through them again, but that's just me, and I do like looking at pictures for explanations too!
Thank you! This is very helpful.