This is still a work in progress, but please let me know what you think about my first attempt at building my website. Your thoughts are appreciated.
Hi Lucille.
I think it will be a better reader experience, if you pull it apart, for instance by making some start phrases in a more black or purple or what you prefer, Like "In the summer.." and then "But -"In the moment.." and "It wasn't always pretty.."
To me, it is easier to keep my eyes in the right place, if there is some support in this way.
By the way, I noticed you have made a self published book. :) ..You can quite easy publish on kindle also, I guess you know, but I first found out lately. :)
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This is still a work in progress, but please let me know what you think about my first attempt at building my website. Your thoughts are appreciated.
Wow! that was refreshing LK, I usually have a problem with reading long post, but you caught my attention and made me want to read the entire page. Thank you very much for that piece. I wanted to leave you a comment, but it tells me I have to log in first. Not sure why its asking me to log in. You should take a look at it
EvaCBD, Thank you for the review. the log in thing has to be removed, I'm still working on the page itself, but I do appreciate you're taking the time to read it. I'll take care of the comment issue today.
I've made the change in settings to remove the requirement for logging in. Again, thanks for the feedback.
Hi Lucille.
I think it will be a better reader experience, if you pull it apart, for instance by making some start phrases in a more black or purple or what you prefer, Like "In the summer.." and then "But -"In the moment.." and "It wasn't always pretty.."
To me, it is easier to keep my eyes in the right place, if there is some support in this way.
By the way, I noticed you have made a self published book. :) ..You can quite easy publish on kindle also, I guess you know, but I first found out lately. :)
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Wow! that was refreshing LK, I usually have a problem with reading long post, but you caught my attention and made me want to read the entire page. Thank you very much for that piece. I wanted to leave you a comment, but it tells me I have to log in first. Not sure why its asking me to log in. You should take a look at it
EvaCBD, Thank you for the review. the log in thing has to be removed, I'm still working on the page itself, but I do appreciate you're taking the time to read it. I'll take care of the comment issue today.
I've made the change in settings to remove the requirement for logging in. Again, thanks for the feedback.