Added new content

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Wanted to ask for some feedback on new content on my site. Thanks in advance :)

http://wealthreview.me/personal-responsibility-vs-blaming-others

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Good idea.
Making a sequel (1-2 more posts) might be a good idea.:)

Lots of great information, but I find that if you type two to three sentences at a time, it's a lot easier on the eye. I really love how you made it very easy to comment, so I left you one on your blog.

Hi Matt
Well done for getting your site up and running.
Just a couple of things
1: Spacing/layout. People like to be able to skim read and at the moment you have quite a lot of dense text which doesn't really make that possible. Suggest you break up your writing into smaller paragraphs.

2. Images - These need to be relevant and easy to see and I think you should have captions. On your latest post you have the same image twice and 2 of the images are too small.

3. You write well, but I found your last post confusing - because I didn't really understand where you're going with it. I went to your about me page to learn what the site was all about - about creating wealth. Okay I get the link in talking about you have to take responsibility for yourself and not blame others but you then talked about leadership and children - what's the relevance to what you're promoting. You want to make sure that you do not confuse your readers. Also the post didn't feel finished -= it was like you had half an idea, broke off and then asked the reader for other ideas. Personally I would edit this page.

By the way I would this request for feedback in the starter classroom in the relevant place so more people will see it

Beverley

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I agree with BIS, also the image of yourself is pixilated which isn't a good look especially as it's so prominent. See if you can get a higher quality image.

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