It's finally time to come out of the closet, I suppose...
[Hopefully that title's not offensive to anyone... it's not intended to be!]
I have been VERY hesitant to share my first REAL site... (although I did trick a few folks with my site rubix one: www.amazingestthingever.siterubix.com)
First off, I'm a perfectionist, so I naturally want more of a finished product than the just-getting-started version we're supposed to share during the training.
I've spent a lot of time with the design, but hopefully you find that the content has a decent start. And hopefully you find the navigation readily understandable too!
All of the pages aren't completed yet, so there are still dead links and incomplete sections.
I haven't linked G+ and Facebook yet... I'll have to have the site a bit more filled out before truly going public.
I welcome your comments and suggestions.
OKAY, ENOUGH STALLING AND EXCUSES:
Thanks,
James.
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Hi James
You clearly have been putting a lot of effort into your site.
I probably slightly disagree with Tiffany's comment below. I actually find the design quite off putting because when you're on a page it feels quite bitty (but that's just my personal taste).
However, I would review some of your content. e.g. The scam from Scott... I found it amusing the way you did it - but in terms of information - I actually wasn't sure whether you were saying it was a scam or not. People want to be able to tell at a glance whether something is a scam and then they will read through the detail. This isn't possible here
I had similar difficulties with Fast First Fifty Review
I know this is still a work in progress. If you're going to review products I would definitely design your own template to ensure that same type of information is covered in each so people know what to expect.
Beverley
HI Beverley,
Thanks so much for taking the time to review and write your thoughts. I will definitely work on uniformity across reviews and a set template for filling them out.
I'm not sure I fully understood your first comment - that the page "feels quite bitty"... do you mean bitty as in this definition below?
"Chiefly British: Composed of small segments lacking cohesion; fragmented:"
Thanks again for taking the time to offer your thoughts!
- James.
Hey James! Overall I like your site. Very clean easy to follow. You have put a lot of work into it....I will keep on the look out for the finish product....
Hi Tiffany,
Thanks a lot for taking the time to look at the site.
I really enjoyed browsing your site a few days ago - very inspiring! I love the neighborhood candy store idea (and its incredible success!)
Many thanks,
- James.
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Hello James, you have really been working hard. I agree a little with Beverly and a little with Tiffany. It is a little bitty. I felt like I was seeing the same info in different places. I enjoyed your graphics, white space, and humor. You are going to have a great site with some tweaks. And, as you said, it is a work in progress.
Hi Betty,
Thanks so much for taking the time to look at my site. I really appreciate your the feedback - it helps me know where I need to focus my attention!
Thanks again,
- James.