Revamped my WA page - No tablet or smartphone

Last Update: November 12, 2014

After watching Jay's latest webinar I revamped my WA review page to a one column wide page.

Check out the webinar, it's great info: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/happy-conversion-funnel-strategies

Back to my page:

No banners, no distractions, just content. I'm thinking of making it a landing page, but I don't know how. What do you think? I would love to hear any comment here or on the page.

I do not have a tablet or smartphone, so if anyone could take a look and let me know if looks great or not so good, do I need to change anything etc. Check the home page as well please.

Thank you so much in advance everyone!

Cheers, Jim

http://webmarketingpass.com/the-wealthy-affiliate-review-2014

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kholmes Premium
I still have to watch that one, have it saved. :))
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Jim-WMP Premium
Go for it, it's a 10 - great for tracking.
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mlshands Premium
I left a comment on your site.
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Jim-WMP Premium
Thank you Melanie - following you.
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HoJo007 Premium
Hey Jim,

What an incredibly EASY to read, stright to the point review of WA. Seriously, one of the better ones that I have seen. I really tried to put myself in the shoes of someone that may be reading it for the first time. I left you a pretty detailed testimonial about WA on the site. I hope you don't mind, but I figured a little reinforcement from an off-the-site member, may add to the value of your review.

One thing I wanted to mention is that it did not look like my comment was waiting for moderation and immediately posted. This can be great for immediate content, but potentially bad for spam or for internet trolls who have an agenda. You may already have it in place. If so, obviously, disregard the suggestion.

Overall, excellent job.I really think readability is underrated and I found your review to be very easy on the eyes and again, to the point. Unfortunately, we live in an 140 character world now, so this is important. It is also one of my absolute weakest capabilities in my content creation. As you have already noticed, I can be long winded from time to time and very specific with my words. This is great for SEO purposes, but not always great for maintaining the readers attention for a long time. But hey, nobody's perfect, but it's all about recognizing it and getting better, right?

Finally, the review looks great on mobile. Also, very easy to read and translates nicely. If you want, I can shoot you over a quick screen shot of what it looks like on mobile so you can see it with your own eyes.

Keep up the good work. All the best and much success to you!

- Howie
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Jim-WMP Premium
Wow, that's the longest comment I've ever seen, thanks for your time Howie.
The comment did not come through, it has to be approved thanks for the warning.

Yes, I'd love to see it, also my home page, about the Secondary menu issue that Carla is mentioning above. Just PM it please.

Again, thanks a lot.

Cheers, Jim
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kholmes Premium
I don't think Howie knows how to leave a short reply...he is a typing info machine...Lol..:))
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HoJo007 Premium
Hahaha to both of you! Yes, I am a man of many words. Regarding the comment I left on your site, it was intentionally specific and I wanted to throw a few LSI keywords into the mix, as I think it can only help with your rankings. Also, it never hurts for your readers to see the opinion and success of another member within the community. Thanks and all the best!

** See, that one wasn't too bad, lol!
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HoJo007 Premium
Hahaha, if you check out what my main website is all about, you will understand a little more clearly. It is definitely something I am working on, but I am a man of many words! LOL, all the best!
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Jim-WMP Premium
LOL agree thanks again - you were mentioning a mobile screenshot of my site. I would love to see it.
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kholmes Premium
Lol, don't worry I wasn't complaining at all. I appreciate the detailed comment you left on my site!! Thanks Howie:))
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HoJo007 Premium
LOL, no worries at all!
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HoJo007 Premium
Jimmy, send me a PM and ill give you my email address and can end the screen shot that way
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Jim-WMP Premium
Done!
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CarlaIves Premium
My tablet is broken, but I brought it up on my iPhone 5. The right margin is a little cut off and there is a Secondary Menu overlapping your title. It IS readable, though.
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Jim-WMP Premium
Thank you for taking a look Carla..
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MozMary Premium Plus
thanks for reminding me to listen in to this! As for the revamp, I too am working from a laptop, but I did notice the latest update to my theme suddenly got rid of everything at the sides leaving one column in the middle!
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