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Got my first cut of a website up and running. I like the milestones WA sets. Please let me know what you all think. A bit too wordy?? http://ozziemedia.siterubix.com/
No I wouldn't criticise it for being too wordy, but it doesn't really jump out at me as having a clear niche to be honest - the name "Ozzie Media" is quite vague really.
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Can I get some critique on my first website, pls? ta
Got my first cut of a website up and running. I like the milestones WA sets. Please let me know what you all think. A bit too wordy?? http://ozziemedia.siterubix.com/
No I don't think it's too wordy and I enjoyed the post. It was a slightly different introduction to WA. For me the first paragraph could be changed to give a clearer idea of what the post is about.
No I wouldn't criticise it for being too wordy, but it doesn't really jump out at me as having a clear niche to be honest - the name "Ozzie Media" is quite vague really.
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No I don't think it's too wordy and I enjoyed the post. It was a slightly different introduction to WA. For me the first paragraph could be changed to give a clearer idea of what the post is about.