Please rate my website
I decided to make this a blog because...
- I feel that the community around me will leave more constructive criticism and actually read somethings on my pages
- I want to know what my inexperience can work on and make improve on
- The "review my site" is too cluttered to get any attention and some people just skim through things. It's better to share it with my instant peers and have a more in depth criticism
So I ask my instant peers and WA members reading this to please visit my website, read a parragraph or two, and a leave a comment on my page on what you think/feel needs some work.
I feel like I am 90% done with my website and it excites me. But before I start screaming victory I need learn what actual readers think of my content
Thank you for your valuable time guys
And if you guys need a more in depth look at your content leave a comment below and include your website and I'll let you know what I think needs some improvements :)
-Daniel
Recent Comments
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Don't quote me on the 250 minimum -- its the minimum for the internet marketing company I write for. And its a ball park--don't add fluff to get from 230 to 250...quality is everything :-) I think there are different opinions out there--but to convey the most basic review, 250 words is a good starting point. I think another WAer says never do less than 500.
I think your site looks very nice and fresh. I agree about the server issue. You really do not want to tell your readers about that. You might consider removing that post. Otherwise overall it is easy to follow and understand.
Thank you for taking your time to review and check out my website :)
I will take that blog down in a few minutes so it won't confuse anyone else in the future.
Thanks again :)
-Daniel
I agree with Bazboy. Amazingly clean template though--your site has visual appeal. I know you said you just started --but I would focus more on original content and less on phone specs. I know --at least for the company I work for--each post/article must be at least 250 words (for SEO purposes --and to provide engaging content)
Some questions to ask yourself (and answer) when writing reviews:
Why is the phone the best? How sturdy is it ? Why do you personally love/hate it? What are the top features in words--not specs? Who is this phone best suited for (teenage girls, FBI agents, business men/women, etc)...you get the idea :-)
Wonderful feedback Bekah
I have to admit my phone's page is not fully developed I still gotta do more research on it. I didn't know 250 words was the minimum. I tend to get lost in a trance when I'm writing but I guess it's good.
I'll take those questions into consideration when i finish up the page
Thank you for your review once again :)
-Daniel
Thank you for taking the time to check out my website guys. I can finally see what I am able to improve on :)
Hi Daniel, congrats, I should say to you, your site is cute, fits your young and fun personality. You've managed to cover all aspects of the site. I hope to check it again when it's 100% complete, so keep us updated..
Thank you for your review
I'll definitely give you guys my finished work so you can help me improve on it further
Thank you again :)
I have put a message on your site, I do agree with bazboy247 it is not obvious what your site is about but I did work it out.I opened it on both my lap top and my iPad and the blogs come up straight away but I thought I had stepped into a conversation. I agree don't talk about what you have to do,or problems no one wants to know..and it is not obvious. You obviously know your niche fabulous information. Well done.
I'll make sure to fix that today. The guys thing is that now I know the theme is indeed responsive
Thank you for taking the time to write a review :)
Hi just a few points to consider
Place your photo on the home page sidebar - your giving people advice they need to see a human face straight away
To be honest although your website is very clean and well designed at the visual level, I was confused as to what your niche was about, it did not stand out to me
The moving picture on the home page is not obvious, what its about, I take it your trying to give people advice on the best phones to buy and contracts
Why not have this on your front page
Don't buy a phone until your have checked out my reviews or avoid being scammed, read my reviews here
Your top blog post is about server speed your readers don't want to know what problems your site has they just want solutions to their own problems
If you tell you readers that your site is slow they will click off the site and onto another one, you may add a little comment about this just to let them know, but you don't want it on your front page you need to draw them in to your reviews so they see your adds and affiliate links
Hope you don't mind my constructive criticism
Barry
Barry
Thank you for being a thorough critique I've taken note of what you've noticed. I w wondering what I should fill up the extra space with so I thought maybe updating giving the readers some updates would be a good idea. But you guys proved me wrong haha
Thank you again for constructive criticism :)
Your webstie is definitely more better then my website. I think it is looking good for the type of niche you chose. I am a beginner so I don't think I can give you the best feedback. But I think you should find a way to prmote those phone companies. Also show some pictures of phone cases on your phone case page. I hope this helps. My website is http://fantasybookreviews.org/. It would be great if you gave me feedback.
First I want congratulate you on your progress so far Cheik.
I've noticed you recently joined WA and you're already doing a great job on building a website. I admire your passion for books since this generation has lost interest and it will take people like you to share that interest with others and help them to be captivated in a book.
About the website: I did see some grammatical mistakes but your reviews are short and to the point. To improve on catching your own mistakes when writing I suggest you open up a new window with the page of interest and review what you've written down. Sometimes as you write things on the dashboard you might not catch it, but to me, it helps to open that extra window to double check my work.
Hope this helps :)
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Hi Danny, Your site looks really nice, and it's cool that you're offering info about some phone plan options that are less known (at least there are a few I'm not familiar with). I think you can really expand on some of those plans to get some more content and longer posts.
Check out Kyle's tutorial on product reviews: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/online-entrepreneur-certification-making-money-level-3/leveraging-product-reviews
I left a comment on your site. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for the review Marcel
I'll definitely expand on my content because there was a lot more I wanted to say but I had to narrow it down in that blog.. I also have pages where I talk about other services.
I'll bookmark that link.
Thanks again for the review :)